DbX - The Dismissal

**DarkbearX** · 03-14-2008, 12:48 AM

I'm not too sure about this song. I had a lot of fun with this, and I guess that's what matters.

Listen to it here!

The end is really iffy, but other than that, I guess it's pretty catchy. :)

What I generally tried to achieve with this track, is kind of stray away from the original trance we've all come to know and love (or hate?).

I bring that style in at the end though :P Tell me what you think, any responses are good. <33

**bmah** · 03-14-2008, 01:35 AM

What I've immediately noticed that I think was unique was the drum beats. The rhythm was quite syncopated for the most part and that's differentiable from the otherwise steady beats of most trance songs. (And as you said already, you reverted back to the typical trance at the last third of the song.)

SulferDragon · 03-14-2008, 02:49 AM

I left you a comment on NG, and I also added you to my favorite audio artists. Hehe <3

P.S. When I saw the thread title I was almost thinking DJSBX or whatever he goes by.

**DarkbearX** · 03-14-2008, 03:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SulferDragon

I left you a comment on NG, and I also added you to my favorite audio artists. Hehe <3

Yay! <33
I like getting comments on Newgrounds. Makes me feel important.

Thanks for responding guys. :)

**Redorigami** · 03-14-2008, 04:23 PM

brb listenin to this crazy ****

...

wayta break my heart twice in one day. IMO, it lacked something. Not decided on what that was yet, but there was just something seriously missing.

**DarkbearX** · 03-14-2008, 04:33 PM

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Originally Posted by Redorigami

IMO, it lacked something. Not decided on what that was yet, but there was just something seriously missing.

Can't win 'em all. Thanks though haha.

**Redorigami** · 03-14-2008, 04:48 PM

Hmm...after listenin for whatever i was missin...
It lacked a catchy melody. Even most DnB has a more hum-worthy tune than that. Must've been what was missin.

**Arcsynth** · 03-14-2008, 05:06 PM

I reviewed. And liked. =D

**DarkbearX** · 03-15-2008, 10:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KgZ

This song sucks.

I'll get better, I swear! </3

Quote:

Originally Posted by Arcsynth

I reviewed. And liked. =D

Haha thanks, glad you enjoyed it.

Also, I deleted it from the AP recklessly, and all my reviews were lost or whatever. Just saying. Thanks for the feedback guys. :P

**Calcium Deposit** · 03-16-2008, 12:56 AM

I think everyone likes your version better... My thread got no reviews haha

TK_Breed · 03-17-2008, 01:45 AM

i said all i needed to say in the review on ng.

**DarkbearX** · 03-17-2008, 02:06 AM

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Originally Posted by TK_Breed

i said all i needed to say in the review on ng.

Thanks haha. I didn't wanna mess up the mix with too much bass (especially around the area you mentioned on your review). Maybe I should add some more around that area, if I can do so without breaking the track, haha.

Thanks again. :P

Gano · 03-17-2008, 02:53 AM

As I stated in your Mario submission, digging the music, nice track DbX

03-14-2008, 12:48 AM	#1
DarkbearX Shimose Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Where you live Posts: 1,995	DbX - The Dismissal I'm not too sure about this song. I had a lot of fun with this, and I guess that's what matters. Listen to it here! The end is really iffy, but other than that, I guess it's pretty catchy. :) What I generally tried to achieve with this track, is kind of stray away from the original trance we've all come to know and love (or hate?). I bring that style in at the end though :P Tell me what you think, any responses are good. <33 __________________ im gay SRL Page Castlevania IV, Super Metroid, and Cave Story speedruns D e e R F o r C e Leaderboards Last edited by DarkbearX; 03-15-2008 at 10:11 PM..

03-14-2008, 01:35 AM	#2
bmah shots FIRED Global Moderator, User Support, Judge Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Edmonton, AB Age: 36 Posts: 8,448	Re: DbX - The Dismissal What I've immediately noticed that I think was unique was the drum beats. The rhythm was quite syncopated for the most part and that's differentiable from the otherwise steady beats of most trance songs. (And as you said already, you reverted back to the typical trance at the last third of the song.)

03-14-2008, 02:49 AM	#3
SulferDragon this is a waste of space Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Oregon Age: 33 Posts: 2,668	Re: DbX - The Dismissal I left you a comment on NG, and I also added you to my favorite audio artists. Hehe <3 P.S. When I saw the thread title I was almost thinking DJSBX or whatever he goes by. __________________

03-14-2008, 05:06 PM	#8
Arcsynth FFR Veteran Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: OR Age: 33 Posts: 280	Re: DbX - The Dismissal I reviewed. And liked. =D __________________ ex 1h, mostly spread now when i play <3

03-16-2008, 12:56 AM	#10
Calcium Deposit I am the liquor Join Date: May 2007 Location: Where ever evil lurks Age: 35 Posts: 706	Re: DbX - The Dismissal I think everyone likes your version better... My thread got no reviews haha

03-17-2008, 01:45 AM	#11
TK_Breed Backstreet for Life! Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Earth Age: 34 Posts: 356	Re: DbX - The Dismissal i said all i needed to say in the review on ng. __________________ ~Breed~

03-17-2008, 02:53 AM	#13
Gano FFR Player Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Fairbanks, Alaska Age: 36 Posts: 997	Re: DbX - The Dismissal As I stated in your Mario submission, digging the music, nice track DbX __________________ doraemon bustin caps

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