"Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread - Page 2

**jimerax** · 01-25-2008, 09:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by giganutsauce

someone test this?

http://www.arch0wl.com/sims/index.php?songid=23638

i... i not sure if good file... ;_;

isn't that the one in RFpack?

I think it's a fun file for the song, but I don't get some 16th rhythms.

TK_yesillkillubitchboez · 01-26-2008, 04:35 AM

http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/...p?songid=23512

Please play, judge and give advice.

**jimerax** · 01-31-2008, 12:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TK_yesillkillubitchboez

http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/...p?songid=23512

Please play, judge and give advice.

I felt rhythms aren't going for the melody correctly in many parts.

also, jumpstreams at the ending don't make sense IMO.

Extremex · 01-31-2008, 09:27 PM

I think this simfile is pretty good.

http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/...p?songid=23869

Kremlin_H · 02-2-2008, 05:25 PM

Hi, this is my first time making a stepfile, so I need some serious critique.... Please tell me if any steps are off... This is for SM.

http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/...p?songid=23922

Roi Siveran · 02-2-2008, 11:50 PM

You were doing steps fine in the middle of the song, Kremlin, but the beginning and end were offsync. Try taking a song, record (Ctrl + R on 64th snap) some steps for it, then sync it afterwards for practice. It probably won't make a good simfile, but it's good to learn how to listen for offbeat arrows and tell which direction they need to move.

As for note placement, it's good enough (no breaking out into unnecessary trills, jacks, rolls, or staircases), but try to have more pitch relevancy.

Kremlin_H · 02-3-2008, 03:44 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Roi Siveran

pitch relevancy

-bow- Thank you for your time and advice... but can you explain to me pitch relevancy?? I'm clueless O_O

CR_fLiP_fOaM · 02-3-2008, 05:38 AM

Download/Play/Test/Judge my simfile XD.

http://files.filefront.com/Caramelld.../fileinfo.html

**BerZerkR** · 02-3-2008, 11:58 AM

Please tell me what could be better...

http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/...p?songid=23970

ducky285 · 02-3-2008, 02:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kremlin_H

-bow- Thank you for your time and advice... but can you explain to me pitch relevancy?? I'm clueless O_O

http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/...ad.php?t=82080

READ

kommisar[os] · 02-3-2008, 02:41 PM

can someone good judge a file i have? its unreleased so far but i want it to be as good as possible if i do release it (looking at jimerax and ducky)

**BerZerkR** · 02-3-2008, 03:22 PM

I'm a pretty good player, if you want I'll judge it...

ducky285 · 02-3-2008, 04:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kommisar[os]

can someone good judge a file i have? its unreleased so far but i want it to be as good as possible if i do release it (looking at jimerax and ducky)

AIM me

**jimerax** · 02-3-2008, 10:10 PM

AIM or e-mail is fine for me.

kommisar[os] · 02-5-2008, 03:57 PM

you guys are never on =/

Corbin Wells · 02-5-2008, 08:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Roi Siveran

You were doing steps fine in the middle of the song, Kremlin, but the beginning and end were offsync. Try taking a song, record (Ctrl + R on 64th snap) some steps for it, then sync it afterwards for practice. It probably won't make a good simfile, but it's good to learn how to listen for offbeat arrows and tell which direction they need to move.

As for note placement, it's good enough (no breaking out into unnecessary trills, jacks, rolls, or staircases), but try to have more pitch relevancy.

Kremlin SHOULD NOT HAVE TO use 64th notes to find the timing of a song. If your BPM matches the speed of the song 4th and 8th's are all you need.

64th is for more advanced close tight knit steps for advanced difficulties and advanced step chart makers.

Trust the 4th and 8th note, plus your ear with the assist tick. If you cant find a mathcing *taptaptap* with your ticking and your 4th or 8th, then the whole thing will be off almost always.

I can't stress the story enough of how I changed one songs bpm by just ONE and the difference was highly noticeable.

Roi Siveran · 02-5-2008, 10:02 PM

That's what I mean... You Ctrl + R it on 64ths (with the right BPM, mind you) and snap it to where it should be on 4ths, 8ths, 12ths, and 16s. And again, not for making a simfile or finding the BPM, but for practice so it'll be easy to recognize where a 16th should be a 12th, and things like that.

But lies on not using 64ths. They are substitutions for crazy dynamic BPMs.

@Flip: Nice.

@Berzerker: Right after the mini-Crowdpleaser trill, there were a few out of sync bursts of notes. Otherwise, great sim!

RATEZ: http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/...p?songid=24043
(Psst, ignore the colors)

KlingPosnot · 02-5-2008, 10:09 PM

http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/...p?songid=23297

I never made a difficulty 2 for this one so idk why it says there is one :P

**jimerax** · 02-17-2008, 12:16 PM

Rated files this time. Don't feel bad if the rating of your file is low.

Otaku Speedvibe (Extremex)
misrhythms in many parts (24ths, etc), patterns (pitch relevancy, bad jack placement). [2/10]

Para Para Sakura (Kremlin_H)
All I can say about this is completely offsync.. find correct BPM and offset first. [0/10]

Scatter v4 (BerZerkR)
Beginning was fun but jack are just pretty annoying (plus 24th/48th ones seem incorrect)/song is repetitive, patterns/layering could be better but ok. [3/10]

Jakyo (Roi Siveran)
overall syncing is completely wrong, 24ths are completely out of place.. they are 16ths. [0/10]

the ongaku song (KlingPosnot) - heavy
misrhythms at parts/felt most of fast notes are going with nothing. [1/10]

Didn't test Flip's because it's on filefront.

Roi Siveran · 02-18-2008, 06:24 PM

O_o They ARE 16ths. I don't know what made me think they were 24ths. Lol, I'll fix that and reupload it.

Thanks for pointing that out.

01-26-2008, 04:35 AM	#22
TK_yesillkillubitchboez FFR Player Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Overland, MO Age: 33 Posts: 240	Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/...p?songid=23512 Please play, judge and give advice. __________________ Like Games? Go here! join the forums! Now in Gold phase! http://arcade.x3nopro.com/downloads.html

01-31-2008, 09:27 PM	#24
Extremex FFR Player Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 116	Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread I think this simfile is pretty good. http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/...p?songid=23869

02-2-2008, 05:25 PM	#25
Kremlin_H FFR Player Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 6	Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread Hi, this is my first time making a stepfile, so I need some serious critique.... Please tell me if any steps are off... This is for SM. http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/...p?songid=23922

02-2-2008, 11:50 PM	#26
Roi Siveran FFR Player Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Thirty Miles and South, New Mexico Age: 33 Posts: 118	Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread You were doing steps fine in the middle of the song, Kremlin, but the beginning and end were offsync. Try taking a song, record (Ctrl + R on 64th snap) some steps for it, then sync it afterwards for practice. It probably won't make a good simfile, but it's good to learn how to listen for offbeat arrows and tell which direction they need to move. As for note placement, it's good enough (no breaking out into unnecessary trills, jacks, rolls, or staircases), but try to have more pitch relevancy. __________________ I fail to AAA.

02-3-2008, 05:38 AM	#28
CR_fLiP_fOaM FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Tokyo, Japan Posts: 1,479	Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread Download/Play/Test/Judge my simfile XD. http://files.filefront.com/Caramelld.../fileinfo.html __________________ "This better not be Snowbound again" Best AAA - Lawn Wake IV, Strangeprogram, Vertex Beta FC all Guru's Except - Death Piano, Revo, CP and the rest I haven't play it.

02-3-2008, 11:58 AM	#29
BerZerkR Scrub Eater Join Date: Nov 2006 Age: 33 Posts: 240	Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread Please tell me what could be better... http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/...p?songid=23970

02-3-2008, 02:41 PM	#31
kommisar[os] Banned Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Moncton, NB, Canada Age: 35 Posts: 4,097	Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread can someone good judge a file i have? its unreleased so far but i want it to be as good as possible if i do release it (looking at jimerax and ducky)

02-3-2008, 03:22 PM	#32
BerZerkR Scrub Eater Join Date: Nov 2006 Age: 33 Posts: 240	Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread I'm a pretty good player, if you want I'll judge it...

02-3-2008, 10:10 PM	#34
jimerax ★_★★^★★ Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Tokyo Posts: 8,185	Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread AIM or e-mail is fine for me.

02-5-2008, 03:57 PM	#35
kommisar[os] Banned Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Moncton, NB, Canada Age: 35 Posts: 4,097	Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread you guys are never on =/

02-5-2008, 10:02 PM	#37
Roi Siveran FFR Player Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Thirty Miles and South, New Mexico Age: 33 Posts: 118	Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread That's what I mean... You Ctrl + R it on 64ths (with the right BPM, mind you) and snap it to where it should be on 4ths, 8ths, 12ths, and 16s. And again, not for making a simfile or finding the BPM, but for practice so it'll be easy to recognize where a 16th should be a 12th, and things like that. But lies on not using 64ths. They are substitutions for crazy dynamic BPMs. @Flip: Nice. @Berzerker: Right after the mini-Crowdpleaser trill, there were a few out of sync bursts of notes. Otherwise, great sim! RATEZ: http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/...p?songid=24043 (Psst, ignore the colors) __________________ I fail to AAA.

02-5-2008, 10:09 PM	#38
KlingPosnot FFR Player Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Minnesota Posts: 237	Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/...p?songid=23297 I never made a difficulty 2 for this one so idk why it says there is one :P

02-17-2008, 12:16 PM	#39
jimerax ★_★★^★★ Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Tokyo Posts: 8,185	Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread Rated files this time. Don't feel bad if the rating of your file is low. Otaku Speedvibe (Extremex) misrhythms in many parts (24ths, etc), patterns (pitch relevancy, bad jack placement). [2/10] Para Para Sakura (Kremlin_H) All I can say about this is completely offsync.. find correct BPM and offset first. [0/10] Scatter v4 (BerZerkR) Beginning was fun but jack are just pretty annoying (plus 24th/48th ones seem incorrect)/song is repetitive, patterns/layering could be better but ok. [3/10] Jakyo (Roi Siveran) overall syncing is completely wrong, 24ths are completely out of place.. they are 16ths. [0/10] the ongaku song (KlingPosnot) - heavy misrhythms at parts/felt most of fast notes are going with nothing. [1/10] Didn't test Flip's because it's on filefront.

02-18-2008, 06:24 PM	#40
Roi Siveran FFR Player Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Thirty Miles and South, New Mexico Age: 33 Posts: 118	Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread O_o They ARE 16ths. I don't know what made me think they were 24ths. Lol, I'll fix that and reupload it. Thanks for pointing that out. __________________ I fail to AAA. Last edited by Roi Siveran; 02-18-2008 at 07:01 PM..

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