My first song...

[sticklydude]

i got done first and zag said it was well synced and steped all i have to do is clear some jacks :P

[DrugstoreCowboy]

goood

[+Firehead+]

well, technically it's not your first song, it's your first arrangement.

also, canon is way too overdone, you should've picked something else.

for a first song that's pretty good, but be original and creative. your patterns and percussion are very bland and generic. especially for this canon, try to stay away from techno patterns, they generally won't lead to a very interesting arrangement.

[purebloodtexan]

Originally Posted by KgZ

I would suggest hosting your music on a site other than Myspace.

www.macjams.com
www.soundclick.com
www.acidplanet.com
www.broadjam.com

These are a few sites I would recommend hosting your music on, so you can get more attention and feedback.

Yeah, I'm definitely considering Macjams. Let me finish a few more songs first and try to secure my Newgrounds material* (it's taking forever) before I go to any other sites. Multiple boards tend to overwhelm me.

*Since it's my first audio submission, a Newgrounds moderator has to look over it first.

[sticklydude]

got rid of alot of jacks

comment. pm or email me if you want to test it plz

sticklydude@gmail.com

[marioGP87]

you could also put your music on NG

[purebloodtexan]

Originally Posted by marioGP87

you could also put your music on NG

That's exactly what I meant by "material."

[purebloodtexan]

The few good artists that go to Newgrounds are amazing. Cornandbeans*, Dimrain47*, Xenogenocide, and ParagonX9 for a few examples.

*These artists have had songs stepped on R1 or the Simfile DB

[behanjc]

Originally Posted by stargroup100

NG is generally filled with retards

http://stargroup100.newgrounds.com/
Haha :P
Not calling you a retard, just seemed funny to me.

[purebloodtexan]

Originally Posted by stargroup100

cornandbeans is okay, but still kinda generic, dimrain sucks, paragonx9 is one the better ones, and I have no idea who xenogenocide is.

and jeff, I said "generally"
in other words, I'm a retard lol

Xenogenocide is a metal/rock artist. I recommend looking at his other boards, since he claims that Newgrounds was hist testing ground until he could agree on a final product.

[Starshot]

For a first remix/cover, it's not bad at all. While one can't really use this song to judge your original composing skills, one can easily see that you have some good sequencing/remixing skills.

Again, I didn't judge the mastering at all, being that it is your first song. Don't worry, that skill will come in time.

[purebloodtexan]

DON'T SUBMIT THE SONG YET!!

I'm trying to redo the song so the kick sounds 10x better.

[purebloodtexan]

Well, Audacity screwed up my last version.

Go ahead and submit the original version.