My music!

[Gorlock]

definitely work on the samples you choose. darkness op was a bit outrageous with the repetitious kick samples in the beginning, it was fortunate that those ended about halfway through. definitely listen to the style of music you are trying to produce, you seem to be stepping out of the norm and it sounds quite amateurish. at your level, don't try to re-invent the wheel, just stick to the styles that are out there, develop you talent, and then see where you can go from there.

on the positive side, you have a bit of skill on the piano roll. that is always good, i noticed especially in scalloped potatoes that your piano was on key and wasn't clashing, good work.

keep up the practice and you'll be printed on vinyl before you know it.