Check out our rap song! It's streaming :)

Flyleef · 08-8-2007, 12:52 PM

I made the beat and my friend Steven A.K.A. Creepy Fingers wrote the lyrics/rapped:
http://www.supload.com/listen?s=S4l08yI18gG

Please tell me what you guys think!

dfrXtreme · 08-8-2007, 12:54 PM

its alright i guess

Flyleef · 08-8-2007, 12:55 PM

Wow, you listened to it in 2 minutes! Listen to the whole song, dude!

RB_Dreamscanner · 08-8-2007, 12:57 PM

pretty good =D

~HentaiXXX~ · 08-8-2007, 12:58 PM

I got very bored at the 1:36 mark...there's no way I'm beating getting past that mark.

**Synthlight** · 08-8-2007, 12:59 PM

"Gimme Head" is an awesome track. It's unfortunate that none of this can go on FFR. Considering you are 14, this is pretty damn amazing. You have to appreciate this guy's flow at his age. The music production quality is holding you back.

Cheers,

Synthlight

RB_Dreamscanner · 08-8-2007, 01:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Synthlight

"Gimme Head" is an awesome track. It's unfortunate that none of this can go on FFR. Considering you are 14, this is pretty damn amazing.

Cheers,

Synthlight

thats basically sig worth flyleef

Flyleef · 08-8-2007, 01:03 PM

Thanks everyone! Songs like this don't go on FFR..? What if I make a song with no cursing?

**travman301** · 08-8-2007, 01:06 PM

I liked it. I liked some of the other tracks better than the one you posted though. If you keep it up you could have a future.

Keep it up.

And this made me lmao.

latest rap music
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_Adrian_ · 08-8-2007, 01:11 PM

nice, put that into FFR

**Synthlight** · 08-8-2007, 01:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Flyleef

Thanks everyone! Songs like this don't go on FFR..? What if I make a song with no cursing?

If gimme head was about something else and the language was toned down. I would do my best to push you into the FFR hip-hop section as a new artist. http://www.myspace/creepyfingers <-- your myspace?

I know these rules suck and I love the song the way it is but we unfortunately have set certain rules that we must adhere to.. Think of FFR like FM Radio rules.

Again, don't get me wrong.. I hate telling an artist to change anything.

Cheers,

Synthlight

Flyleef · 08-8-2007, 01:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Synthlight

If gimme head was about something else and the language was toned down. I would do my best to push you into the FFR hip-hop section as a new artist. http://www.myspace/creepyfingers <-- your myspace?

I know these rules suck and I love the song the way it is but we unfortunately have set certain rules that we must adhere to.. Think of FFR like FM Radio rules.

Again, don't get me wrong.. I hate telling an artist to change anything.

Cheers,

Synthlight

No, I think you guys forgot to read that my friend is rapping and I made the beat. That's my friends Myspace.

**Adamaja456** · 08-8-2007, 01:28 PM

it was pretty tiight

i like the beat to it

although the "see ya later.... alligator" made me stop the song XD

Flyleef · 08-8-2007, 01:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Adamaja456

it was pretty tiight

i like the beat to it

although the "see ya later.... alligator" made me stop the song XD

lol: "see u later... alligator.. she touch herself then smoke mo weed chrnoic masturbator."

lol u should've heard the rest

**Synthlight** · 08-8-2007, 01:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Flyleef

No, I think you guys forgot to read that my friend is rapping and I made the beat. That's my friends Myspace.

I may be wrong but I think the beat needs some refining (for the first song you linked). Did you also do "Gimme Head". For your age you have some serious skills man. Keep at it. Really.

Cheers,

Synthlight

Flyleef · 08-8-2007, 01:47 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Synthlight

I may be wrong but I think the beat needs some refining (for the first song you linked). Did you also do "Gimme Head". For your age you have some serious skills man. Keep at it. Really.

Cheers,

Synthlight

No, he did. I just started making music on this on program a couple months ago, so yeah, it probably does need some refining. I play piano so I know how to make music and stuff, I just need to get used to the program I'm using. (Fruity Loops)

Quote:

The music production quality is holding you back

Wait, what do you mean? lol

**Nyokou** · 08-8-2007, 02:42 PM

o__O Wow, that's really good. I'm jealous.

I wanted to do this kinda stuff for my friends when I was younger, cause they were like rhythmically challenged on computer music programs when it came to making beats, but they were amazing emcees.

Good job. xD

Flyleef · 08-8-2007, 08:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nyokou

o__O Wow, that's really good. I'm jealous.

I wanted to do this kinda stuff for my friends when I was younger, cause they were like rhythmically challenged on computer music programs when it came to making beats, but they were amazing emcees.

Good job. xD

Thanks!

Try doing it now then!

RB_Dreamscanner · 08-9-2007, 11:05 AM

ew...

anyway you got amazing talent man

~HentaiXXX~ · 08-9-2007, 02:00 PM

You do have good talent, I just don't like rap/hip hop too much.

PS: Re-listened, the lyrics made me laugh a little bit.

08-8-2007, 12:52 PM	#1
Flyleef FFR Player Join Date: May 2007 Location: SoCal Posts: 401	Check out our rap song! It's streaming :) I made the beat and my friend Steven A.K.A. Creepy Fingers wrote the lyrics/rapped: http://www.supload.com/listen?s=S4l08yI18gG Please tell me what you guys think! __________________ No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change, these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care. My heart, filled with loving radiance Is forever thinking of you. These words that we play are a pleasant melody All I want is to have you by my side, so that I won't lose my smiling eyes even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars. Last edited by Flyleef; 08-8-2007 at 01:10 PM..

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08-8-2007, 12:55 PM	#3
Flyleef FFR Player Join Date: May 2007 Location: SoCal Posts: 401	Re: Check out my rap song! It's streaming :) Wow, you listened to it in 2 minutes! Listen to the whole song, dude! __________________ No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change, these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care. My heart, filled with loving radiance Is forever thinking of you. These words that we play are a pleasant melody All I want is to have you by my side, so that I won't lose my smiling eyes even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.

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08-8-2007, 01:03 PM	#8
Flyleef FFR Player Join Date: May 2007 Location: SoCal Posts: 401	Re: Check out my rap song! It's streaming :) Thanks everyone! Songs like this don't go on FFR..? What if I make a song with no cursing? __________________ No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change, these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care. My heart, filled with loving radiance Is forever thinking of you. These words that we play are a pleasant melody All I want is to have you by my side, so that I won't lose my smiling eyes even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars. Last edited by Flyleef; 08-8-2007 at 01:05 PM..

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travman301 #swagdog Join Date: Mar 2004 Age: 35 Posts: 2,641	Re: Check out my rap song! It's streaming :) I liked it. I liked some of the other tracks better than the one you posted though. If you keep it up you could have a future. Keep it up. And this made me lmao. latest rap music Mariah Carey & Whitney Houston - When You Believe Chris Brown - Kiss Kiss (ft. T-Pain) Lenny Kravitz - Are You Gonna Go My Way Se7en - Again *ATeens - Can't Help Falling in Love ATeens - Can't Help Falling in Love*

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