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TWG Chaos
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![]() Take a listen! My 3rd ever Remix.
I would LOVE it if you could tell me what you think. Your advice helps me alot. Thanks <3 https://soundcloud.com/djv1/all-my-good-starships-went
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Celestial Harbor
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![]() basses and percussion is veeeerryyy underwhelming.
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stargroup & me are <3'ers
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![]() Yea bass and kick should come through more for sure. But overall really catchy, good synth work, keep improving
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Also, thank you both so much for your input <3
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stargroup & me are <3'ers
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![]() Bass definitely comes out more now I think
![]() Also this may just be me being crazy.. but that chord thing at the very beginning seems just a tad off beat for me somehow..? Not noticeable when percussion and other instruments come and again it could be my brain farting |
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TWG Chaos
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And yeah I've been trying to experiment with that works well and what dosent. I guess for this song in particular it was more of a stereotypical club / dance song? I dunno. But seriously, what are your thoughts on this track below then? This track I did a few months ago really I think kind of gave a surprise to the listeners I think... I think this is more what you are looking for?(At 2:00 about) EDIT: Lol the first second is cutoff and i just realized it now. Gonna do a reupload of this ![]() https://soundcloud.com/djv1/party-young-style Quote:
Also, what section? I guess I cant tell from how long Ive listened to it lolz
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stargroup & me are <3'ers
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I was referring from like 0-8s. (and it continues throughout but sounds fine with everything on top of it)
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