Hard Song Special Batch - Submission Closed

[ninjaKIWI]

Originally Posted by kjwkjw

i love (orange things) (ninjaKIWI) 8/10 [+]
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Playtest: Nicely done; that was very fun to play.
Editor: You may want to fade out the mp3 so the ending of the song doesn't come across as strange to people.
m. 40 (159.75) - ghost note?
m. 49 (192.50) - feels like there needs to be a note here - you decide (you might have to change the patterns around there a little bit).
Short Thoughts: i love (this file)

I'm debating stepping the ending but ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh~ it's weird. Thanks for the notes!

Originally Posted by qqwref

i love (orange things) (ninjaKIWI) - 8/10
Playtest: Nice flowing stream/jumpstream parts, and some interesting patterns. Nothing too awkward, either.
Editor: There are a few spots where I'd like to see some extra notes: the last 4th note in m7, the end of m10 Normally I'd agree, but I've chosen not to step that percussion until later in the song (after the speed up), m23-24 I'm debating stepping the vocals here, but I'm still kind of iffy. All of the judges would seem to prefer that though so!, the 8th note just before m42 and two more after the first hand in m42Yes, thank you! I didn't notice those sounds but it fits nicely., and the very ending (after your last note).

Originally Posted by nigs

I Love (Orange Things) (ninjaKIWI)
- File was early by 0.04. Global offset issue most likely.
- M23+ (Beat 88+) I feel you should've at the very least layered in the vocals. It'd be a better transition into M24+ and it wouldn't abruptly break the flow of the file like it does here.
- A lot of opportunity to use hands that you didn't quite take advantage of. I feel that the 4 hands you have in the file are random and don't really have much impact to the song.
- Layering's good for the most part. Nothing erroneous worth noting. Patterns flow fluidly.
[7/10]

Originally Posted by bmah

i love (orange things) / ninjaKIWI
rating: 5/10 [+?]
- chart is too easy for this batch
- m7,10-11,13: missed arrow(s)/jump(s) to the drums and percussion
- m7-8,10,12-13: missed arrow right before the next measure (e.g. end of m7) to the bass drum. I see that you do this later on in the song, so perhaps you're just layering selectively? Yup. I hope that's okay, and doesn't seem too random or inconsistent?
- 30.29s: jump
- m23-24: too empty; fill up a little
- Summary: A very good file, but it's a bit too easy to accept in this batch. Please send it in again during a regular batch!

Man, I really wish I had more SAPs. I already have a dozen files ready for the next batch and 3 files per batch is going to clog me. FFR Winter pack, here I come.

Originally Posted by bmah

For this batch, if you've got 6 ratings for a song, that's all you need. If you have less than that, and the other is/are [PASS], you'll just have to wait as we sort things out...

Oh, I see. Thanks!