Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

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(Ninzaburo) Babylon
Column 1 Bass on singles is weird and doesn't feel right. As Moches' mentioned in his review, there's a difficulty inconsistency. Holds were all pretty random. Rejected

(Ninzaburo) End Time
Good song but still this file does not do justice. Noticed that column 1 bass again which bothers me (even if it is just one section). Didn't like your mine usage at all. Layering is all over the place. Rejected

(Cyrenics) Ska de Chocobo!!
A lot of your hand usage is too intense. Jumps with mini-freezes would fit better. There's inconsistency with your hold usages. Semi-climax theory at the end which was pretty OK. Found this too repetitive and generic to warrant an accept. Rejected

(Moches) Night
Typical Moches file. Well structured however it's too generic and drags on for me so I can't say yes to this. The only thing I found interesting were the BPM gimmicks near the end other than that this file doesn't offer much. Rejected

(Samurai7694) Classic 4 Pop'n Music
Hands are too intense for the song. Better to leave them as jumps. This is actually pretty well structured and layered however I wouldn't warrant this pack worthy because it doesn't offer much. Would be a good file for some other pack but not for Xoon 5. Rejected

(trumaestro) King Dedede Battle
Short and straightforward however not pack worthy. Would be a good file for some other pack but not for Xoon 5. Rejected

(Ferrari) Red Hot Skull
Well structured. Enjoyable and unique chill file. As Moches mentioned, there's some minor freeze abuse with the mini-freezes. Accepted.

(Scylaax) DEMY
You step too much t+pazolite, rofl. I quit out of this due to the dumpy patterns and how generic this was. Rejected

(Scylaax) Fire Leo Syrinx
As Moches mentioned, there's layering errors and inconsistencies. Not bad but needs work. Rejected.

(Scylaax) Metal Squad
Cool metal arrange. Well structured and layered. Only small complaint is the percussion layering when you transition from that to the guitar solo and then back again. It doesn't really feel right. Nonetheless, I'll pass this. Accepted.

(Sargon) Remember
There are some errors/inconsistencies with jump and hand layering which confused me in a bunch of spots because it's all over the place. The mini-freezes that layer the higher pitched piano bugged me (I did the same thing in my Colors of Sorrow file and that didn't turn out well). Overall layering and structure is good and the song is cool. I could see this getting into the pack with some fixes. Rejected for the time being.