There is definitely parts in here that can use some revising. I really don't know how to fix it though. So I am posting it here hoping that I will get some feedback on how I can improve it.
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You are caught now, like a deer in headlights
You're stuck, you've been bound by your own fears.
You must break free or you will forever be condemned.
You can't say that a life isn't worth dying for,
And what if you gave it all and received nothing.
Would it really matter?
You've been waiting for this one day all your life,
it is nothing short of predictable that it is now presented.
But it is now that you must stop holding your head down,
You shant Give it up!
Get a hold of yourself now!
Or you might as well forget it all.
Can't you see, with each blow they become more powerless?
You must Dig deep within and find the courage to speak.
Are you really still bound by the fear?
Can't you speak or are you just doomed here?
You're there again, a deer in headlights.
You've given up.
To save your own life.
Untitled
You are caught now, like a deer in headlights
You're stuck, you've been bound by your own fears.
You must break free or you will forever be condemned.
You can't say that a life isn't worth dying for,
And what if you gave it all and received nothing.
Would it really matter?
You've been waiting for this one day all your life,
it is nothing short of predictable that it is now presented.
But it is now that you must stop holding your head down,
You shant Give it up!
Get a hold of yourself now!
Or you might as well forget it all.
Can't you see, with each blow they become more powerless?
You must Dig deep within and find the courage to speak.
Are you really still bound by the fear?
Can't you speak or are you just doomed here?
You're there again, a deer in headlights.
You've given up.
To save your own life.
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