Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

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  • ChaosMaster1
    FFR Player
    • Nov 2005
    • 429
    #1

    Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

    (i wouldve posted this months ago...but i thought it was a stupid idea)

    BOOK OF TASSELFOOT
    In the beginning, there was Terror From Beyond...
    Tasselfoot had AAA'd that.
    then came Get on the move,
    He also AAA'd that.
    Next...the first song he did not AAA...
    Story of Snowman and Sunshine girl,
    he got 2 goods on it.
    after which...conitinued to get more and more AAAs.
    and became a site admin(if im right)
    And lived...on..to AAA more songs...and do his real life job...and stuff....for....a long time.

    END
    -----------------------------------------------------------------
    Last edited by ChaosMaster1; 12-29-2006, 08:15 PM.

    15 AAAs!
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    • TheRapingDragon
      A car crash mind
      • Aug 2005
      • 9788
      #2
      Re: Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

      How in the hell was that "Bible Style" apart from you including "In the beginning" at the start of your post.

      Also, this has to be the lamest attempt at satirical literature that I have ever seen, this is horrible.

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        • ChaosMaster1
          FFR Player
          • Nov 2005
          • 429
          #3
          Re: Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

          Originally posted by TheRapingDragon
          How in the hell was that "Bible Style" apart from you including "In the beginning" at the start of your post.

          Also, this has to be the lamest attempt at satirical literature that I have ever seen, this is horrible.
          Originally posted by ChaosMaster1
          (i wouldve posted this months ago...but i thought it was a stupid idea)
          I was right. i have no literature talent whatsoever...scratch that...no talent whatsoever. what the hell was I thinking?
          Last edited by ChaosMaster1; 12-29-2006, 08:27 PM.

          15 AAAs!

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            • TheRapingDragon
              A car crash mind
              • Aug 2005
              • 9788
              #4
              Re: Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

              Yes, you would be correct.

              Perhaps take some lessons on how to write correctly, then learn how to spell and how to use proper sentence structure.

              Then learn how to turn a decent thought process into logical and legible writing.

              Then start to create a story focusing around your main point (which in this case would be the bible style of writing).

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                • ChaosMaster1
                  FFR Player
                  • Nov 2005
                  • 429
                  #5
                  Re: Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

                  well...i was trying to put together the stories of great events in FFR history...but this was the ultamite fail.
                  im not even gonna bother with my other creation: the UNCUT Legend of Zelda(TM)
                  (its literally my idea)

                  15 AAAs!

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                    • TheRapingDragon
                      A car crash mind
                      • Aug 2005
                      • 9788
                      #6
                      Re: Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

                      See what I'm talking about. That post there had grammar, spelling, and structural problems.

                      The stories of "great events" should be detailed, or at least interesting. What you wrote was "Man A did action A, man A then did action B, man A then did action C causing action D". It's all very stale. Nobody wants to read that sort of thing.

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                        • tsugomaru
                          FFR Player
                          • Aug 2004
                          • 3962
                          #7
                          Re: Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

                          We need that one insult. Did your writing happen by accident?

                          By the way, this sounds like a child story.

                          Guess what we aren't?

                          ~Tsugomaru
                          Originally posted by Hiluluk
                          WHEN do you think people die...?
                          When their heart is pierced by a bullet from a pistol...? No.
                          When they succumb to an incurable disease...? No.
                          When they drink soup made with a poisonous mushroom...? NO!!!
                          IT'S WHEN A PERSON IS FORGOTTEN...!!!

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                            • ChaosMaster1
                              FFR Player
                              • Nov 2005
                              • 429
                              #8
                              Re: Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

                              Originally posted by ChaosMaster1's Profile
                              Join Date: Nov 2005
                              Location: with your girlfriend =D
                              Age: 14
                              Posts: 225
                              You are 19, While I am 5 years younger than you, Do you expect a masterpiece from me or something?

                              15 AAAs!

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                                • Kit-
                                  Private College
                                  FFR Simfile Author
                                  • Feb 2006
                                  • 536
                                  #9
                                  Re: Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

                                  Originally posted by TheRapingDragon
                                  It's all very stale. Nobody wants to read that sort of thing.
                                  One could argue that it contributes to the biblical style.

                                  Needs more Man A did Man B.
                                  <img src="Bent Lines" />

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                                    • TheRapingDragon
                                      A car crash mind
                                      • Aug 2005
                                      • 9788
                                      #10
                                      Re: Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

                                      You are 19, While I am 5 years younger than you, Do you expect a masterpiece from me or something?
                                      I expect more than this yes. Age doesn't matter when it comes to writing. Look at people like Mead who are 16 and yet write amazing work.

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                                        • ChaosMaster1
                                          FFR Player
                                          • Nov 2005
                                          • 429
                                          #11
                                          Re: Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

                                          yea...i just suck at living...my only talent is comedy...and it looks like I suck at that too.
                                          I'm not exactly the one that pays attention in school, not the adjusting my glasses and fixing my pocket protector and all.
                                          But i am wondering if I should try my other Idea(Uncut LoZ)(TM)
                                          Do you think I should try that one instead?

                                          15 AAAs!

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                                            • Izlude77714
                                              FFR Player
                                              • Jan 2006
                                              • 1195
                                              #12
                                              Re: Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

                                              . wtf....
                                              Originally posted by dore
                                              omg u bumpd u shud dye in a flam
                                              Originally posted by smartdude1212
                                              dye in sum thundurstaorm
                                              Originally posted by Loot You
                                              lmao chapstick d***s i love you izl your face should be on money or something
                                              Originally posted by Loot You
                                              if izldude gets banned again i'm just giving up music games in general
                                              i'll get sam, ieat, and everyone else to go shashakiro on your asses and switch to guitar hero forever
                                              Originally posted by Sprite-
                                              good thing izlude was unbanned or idk how else cheaters would ever be stopped

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                                                • Biff_tech
                                                  so the 17 ate the 12 eh.
                                                  • Oct 2004
                                                  • 826
                                                  #13
                                                  Re: Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

                                                  Originally posted by Kit-
                                                  Needs more Man A did Man B.
                                                  Ew gay! hahaha jk but great stuff great stuff
                                                  CLICK \/ \/ \/ \/ \/ \/ \/ \/ \/

                                                  Sig by Darkmonkey AKA Clowd

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                                                    • Tasselfoot
                                                      Retired BOSS
                                                      FFR Simfile Author
                                                      • Jul 2003
                                                      • 25185
                                                      #14
                                                      Re: Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

                                                      I think my best on SSSG is 3 goods... *checks* nope... 4.
                                                      RIP

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                                                        • tsugomaru
                                                          FFR Player
                                                          • Aug 2004
                                                          • 3962
                                                          #15
                                                          Re: Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

                                                          Originally posted by ChaosMaster1
                                                          yea...i just suck at living...my only talent is comedy...and it looks like I suck at that too.
                                                          I'm not exactly the one that pays attention in school, not the adjusting my glasses and fixing my pocket protector and all.
                                                          But i am wondering if I should try my other Idea(Uncut LoZ)(TM)
                                                          Do you think I should try that one instead?
                                                          This post sucks, but it is better than the one you used to start your thread. So yes, in short, you can do better. Age means nothing. You can still achieve things at 14.

                                                          ~Tsugomaru
                                                          Originally posted by Hiluluk
                                                          WHEN do you think people die...?
                                                          When their heart is pierced by a bullet from a pistol...? No.
                                                          When they succumb to an incurable disease...? No.
                                                          When they drink soup made with a poisonous mushroom...? NO!!!
                                                          IT'S WHEN A PERSON IS FORGOTTEN...!!!

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