Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

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  • FoJaR
    The Worst
    • Nov 2005
    • 2816
    #16
    Re: Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

    his post wasnt that bad.

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      • TheRapingDragon
        A car crash mind
        • Aug 2005
        • 9788
        #17
        Re: Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

        Originally posted by FoJaR
        his post wasnt that bad.
        As a literary piece, yes, it was.

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          • mead1
            Cerebellumberjack
            FFR Simfile Author
            • Aug 2003
            • 3960
            #18
            Re: Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

            GOD IS DEAD

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              • TD_Project
                FFR Player
                • Dec 2005
                • 427
                #19
                Re: Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

                He was just trying to write something. Leave the poor 14 year old kid alone. Besides if he doesn't have the right writing techniques or abilities, maybe just suggest to him what he has done wrong, then he can go and fix it instead of bluntly insulting him.

                "Also, this has to be the lamest attempt at satirical literature that I have ever seen, this is horrible."

                Very smooth.

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                  • mead1
                    Cerebellumberjack
                    FFR Simfile Author
                    • Aug 2003
                    • 3960
                    #20
                    Re: Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

                    Yeah, any 14 that thinks this story was remotely clever should be put down immediately.

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                      • ChaosMaster1
                        FFR Player
                        • Nov 2005
                        • 429
                        #21
                        Re: Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

                        Originally posted by TD_Project
                        He was just trying to write something. Leave the poor 14 year old kid alone. Besides if he doesn't have the right writing techniques or abilities, maybe just suggest to him what he has done wrong, then he can go and fix it instead of bluntly insulting him.

                        "Also, this has to be the lamest attempt at satirical literature that I have ever seen, this is horrible."

                        Very smooth.
                        the first person to ever stand up for me....in my life...=)

                        15 AAAs!

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                          • TD_Project
                            FFR Player
                            • Dec 2005
                            • 427
                            #22
                            Re: Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

                            It's all good. When you write literature make sure your punctuation and grammar is good. Logically plan your sentences, etc. Besides I know your post wasn't 100% deadly serious so a bit of error isn't a bad thing.

                            Just practice though, otherwise you'll keep getting randomly insulted from people during your stay on FFR.

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                              • BLAZZE-
                                Banned
                                • Oct 2006
                                • 673
                                #23
                                Re: Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

                                What a team!










































                                Just leave.

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                                  • TD_Project
                                    FFR Player
                                    • Dec 2005
                                    • 427
                                    #24
                                    Re: Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

                                    Originally posted by BLAZZE-
                                    What a team!










































                                    Just leave.
                                    I lol'd

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                                      • Silver_Brian
                                        ¯\(°_o)/¯ ¯\(o_°)/¯
                                        FFR Simfile Author
                                        • Apr 2005
                                        • 5576
                                        #25
                                        Re: Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

                                        Originally posted by ChaosMaster1
                                        You are 19, While I am 5 years younger than you, Do you expect a masterpiece from me or something?
                                        You did post in the Literature forum.

                                        Originally posted by Moogle-master
                                        i now have another excuse to grow a dick
                                        Originally posted by FishFishRevolution
                                        "i've seen your little boy's penis"

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                                          • Nikkis
                                            Banned
                                            • Nov 2006
                                            • 81
                                            #26
                                            Re: Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

                                            It'd probably be better to LEARN the story of FFR first...then learn how to grammatically enhance your writing. What you wrote did NOT happen. Which contributes to more failure in your attempt to write a story.

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                                              • mead1
                                                Cerebellumberjack
                                                FFR Simfile Author
                                                • Aug 2003
                                                • 3960
                                                #27
                                                Re: Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

                                                Originally posted by ChaosMaster1
                                                the first person to ever stand up for me....in my life...=)
                                                Cry about it on the internet.

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                                                  • ReikonKeiri
                                                    i wanna be ur pop star
                                                    • Jun 2006
                                                    • 2388
                                                    #28
                                                    Re: Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

                                                    Originally posted by BLAZZE-
                                                    What a team!

                                                    Just leave.
                                                    Leaving large amounts of empty lines in your posts is hilarious.


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                                                    Originally posted by Moogle-master
                                                    To be fair, having all the BlazBlue's isn't good taste more then it is common sense.

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                                                      • BLAZZE-
                                                        Banned
                                                        • Oct 2006
                                                        • 673
                                                        #29
                                                        Re: Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

                                                        Originally posted by ReikonKeiri
                                                        Leaving large amounts of empty lines in your posts is hilarious.
                                                        Because you're a really funny poster.




























                                                        NOT

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                                                          • ReikonKeiri
                                                            i wanna be ur pop star
                                                            • Jun 2006
                                                            • 2388
                                                            #30
                                                            Re: Story of FFR (Bible Style!)

                                                            Originally posted by BLAZZE-
                                                            I'm a ***.
                                                            ***.


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                                                            Originally posted by Moogle-master
                                                            To be fair, having all the BlazBlue's isn't good taste more then it is common sense.

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