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  • Xiz
    TWG Chaos
    FFR Simfile Author
    • Feb 2012
    • 3399
    #1

    When I Art...

    So I have gotten into photography recently, as some of you might know.
    I'm a beginner, so any critique would be great! I'll go ahead and upload a few of my works, and keep this updated if people have any interest.

    I'm not that big on photoshop, so most of the photos you will see will come right out of the camera, or have minor color correction. Enjoy!







    Perhaps it's corny to name my pictures, but I am doing so anyway:

    End of Winter:





    End of Winter 2:





    Isolated Individuality:





    First of Spring:





    Waiting to Bloom:



    Last edited by Xiz; 04-30-2013, 02:25 PM.

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    • Ohaider
      FFR Veteran
      • Jun 2012
      • 2893
      #2
      Re: When I Art...

      Oh my, This is brilliant

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        • noname219
          FFR Wiki Admin
          • May 2007
          • 1694
          #3
          Re: When I Art...

          Originally posted by Ohaider
          Oh my, This is brilliant
          For a second, I thought you responded to yourself.

          Gorgeous pics Xiv. Isolated Individuality is my favourite.

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            • Ohaider
              FFR Veteran
              • Jun 2012
              • 2893
              #4
              Re: When I Art...

              Lmfao

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                • Xiz
                  TWG Chaos
                  FFR Simfile Author
                  • Feb 2012
                  • 3399
                  #5
                  Re: When I Art...

                  Originally posted by noname219
                  Gorgeous pics Xiv. Isolated Individuality is my favourite.
                  Originally posted by noname219
                  Gorgeous pics Xiv.
                  Originally posted by noname219
                  pics Xiv.
                  Originally posted by noname219
                  Xiv.

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                    • Arntonach
                      Owlbears Rock!
                      • Mar 2012
                      • 2494
                      #6
                      Re: When I Art...

                      dat v...

                      But I got to say, these are hella impressive. Might use these for my desktop. Good job!
                      pack of hard stuffs

                      pack of my stuffs

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                        • Ohaider
                          FFR Veteran
                          • Jun 2012
                          • 2893
                          #7
                          Re: When I Art...

                          How did you get the Individuality one?

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                            • noname219
                              FFR Wiki Admin
                              • May 2007
                              • 1694
                              #8
                              Re: When I Art...

                              Sorry Xiv. ha.

                              It's hard to come with tips because I really don't have anything wrong to say. The compositions are very nice and you use light very effectively. The contrasts work well but on First of Spring, the colours are a bit oversatured for me - that's more a personnal preference because I like to keep earthy tones when photographing nature.
                              I'm interested to see what you can do with wider shots.
                              Last edited by noname219; 06-2-2013, 05:10 PM.

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                                • Crazyjayde
                                  FFR Veteran
                                  • May 2007
                                  • 1169
                                  #9
                                  Re: When I Art...

                                  Ok. Isolated Individuality is a brilliant and stunning picture, props to you. Love the shots, waiting for something focusing more on composition

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                                    • Quigly
                                      nah
                                      • Jan 2008
                                      • 3506
                                      #10
                                      Re: When I Art...

                                      yoooo this is ballin
                                      and the subject matter of the stems makes for great diagonals so they're solid composition-wise

                                      KEEP IT UP~
                                      nah

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                                        • Spenner
                                          Forum User
                                          • Nov 2006
                                          • 2403
                                          #11
                                          Re: When I Art...

                                          Isolated Individuality is by far the strongest photo of the bunch here IMO. The composition and texture created by the cluster of flakes is really awesome to look at.

                                          The only thing I might change is boosting some of the levels of highlights in the isolated flake, more clarity, and perhaps playing with Shadows/Highlights palette and masking it just to the snowflake (just so the contrast between the bunch of flakes and the isolated one is even more strong).

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                                            • V-Ormix
                                              Banned
                                              • Aug 2008
                                              • 4677
                                              #12
                                              Re: When I Art...

                                              surreal sir, great work

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                                                • Xiz
                                                  TWG Chaos
                                                  FFR Simfile Author
                                                  • Feb 2012
                                                  • 3399
                                                  #13
                                                  Re: When I Art...

                                                  Originally posted by Arntonach
                                                  Might use these for my desktop. Good job!
                                                  I would be honored

                                                  Originally posted by Ohaider
                                                  How did you get the Individuality one?
                                                  Macro photography. In other words a lens thats pretty much the equivalent of a microscope.
                                                  Originally posted by noname219
                                                  Sorry Xiv. ha.

                                                  (Also not sure why this Xiv thing is now catching on and becoming a thing lolz)
                                                  Originally posted by noname219
                                                  I'm interested to see what you can do with wider shots.
                                                  I need a wider lens lol. It's on my list to get, once I scavenge enough money again. (Perhaps I can make my night-sky lens my wide... whenever I buy it lol)

                                                  Originally posted by Spenner
                                                  Isolated Individuality is by far the strongest photo of the bunch here IMO. The composition and texture created by the cluster of flakes is really awesome to look at. The only thing I might change is boosting some of the levels of highlights in the isolated flake, more clarity, and perhaps playing with Shadows/Highlights palette and masking it just to the snowflake (just so the contrast between the bunch of flakes and the isolated one is even more strong).
                                                  Yeah, I see what you mean. I worked on that photo for days and ended up just kinda being all like "okay, this is the best I can do for now" - I might repost later with some levels shifted around and whatnot.

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                                                    • Arkuski
                                                      FFR Veteran
                                                      • Jul 2006
                                                      • 1118
                                                      #14
                                                      Re: When I Art...

                                                      These are incredivle xiv, I like End of Vinter the vest.

                                                      Originally posted by Wayward Vagabond
                                                      i can appreciate a good looking woman when i see one and this one just happened to be my mom

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                                                        • Coolboyrulez0
                                                          VICES
                                                          FFR Simfile Author
                                                          FFR Music Producer
                                                          • Aug 2006
                                                          • 10042
                                                          #15
                                                          Re: When I Art...

                                                          XivHD
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