3,000 or more credit Writing tournament

[Hudelf]

Re: 3,000 or more credit Writing tournament

You spelled senses two different ways and neither were correct.

I see only one spelling. o_O

Hmm, I have a couple short stories, but I don't really want them on the interwebs until I get them published.

[ShastaTwist]

Re: 3,000 or more credit Writing tournament

I see only one spelling. o_O

Sences



the scent of her hair,
the touch of her skin,
with all of the sences,
buried within.

the sound of her voice,
the taste of her kiss,
with all of the senes,
is really true bliss.

the sight of her beauty,
with each passing day,
with all of the sences,
makes the pain go away.

Utilize your sense of sight.

[Callipygian]

Re: 3,000 or more credit Writing tournament

Nice tournament. And compliments to chaz for the nice poems. I have written some poetry over the years, but with a few exceptions those are written in Dutch. English is not my mother tongue so it is hard for me to express my feelings in it. Still, I hope you can appreciate this poem which I have written a few years ago.

I could add a few of my essays, some of which have been published in some semi-scientific magazine already, but I guess noone is really interested in my lengthy elaborations on the influence of religion on ethnocentrism or the philosophical underpinnings of Edward Albee's major plays lol. I might add a short essay as a tiebreaker maybe:P.

Cheers,

Calli

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The Circle of Love

Oh Sun would you shine bright for me
Illumine mere shades of what’s real
Break through the crusts that conceal
Shed light on life so I can see

So I can see the essence of being
The thing that gives all matter sense
Make me look through hazes dense
Entrust me the key to a-freeing

To a-freeing objects from their shadow
Unlock people from their stern cages
Reveal to me the world of sages
Let blossom the rich golden meadow

The rich golden meadow that springs from cold ground
To make clear the truth is more than the sum
Of its parts that together contain an ovum
That will open up upon perception real sound

Perception real sound although unbound to reason
Passion that smiles in mirrors profuse
Love is the only right key we can use
To unlock itself in all things, every season

Oh Sun would you shine bright for me
Illumine mere shades of what’s real
Break through the crusts that conceal
Shed light on life so I can see

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[Hudelf]

Re: 3,000 or more credit Writing tournament

Utilize your sense of sight.

Utilize your sense of amiability.

[TD_m0nster]

Re: 3,000 or more credit Writing tournament

Six posts in a row?

Are you dumb?

did i ask if you cared?

besides, it took little out of my life during the middle of the night where i had nothing else better to do.

and no i'm not dumb

[ShastaTwist]

Re: 3,000 or more credit Writing tournament

Utilize your sense of amiability.

Utilize your sense of Internet tone.

I didn't mean that comment to be rude.

did i ask if you cared?

besides, it took little out of my life during the middle of the night where i had nothing else better to do.

and no i'm not dumb

I don't need you to ask me if I care, this isn't pre-19th amendment.

Edit your previous posts to encompass all you need to say, don't post them six different times.

[demonllama6124]

Re: 3,000 or more credit Writing tournament

cmon everyone, utalize your sense of HUMOR.lol.
sorry, couldnt resist.

yeah, i know it was spelled wrong. I had it saved on a site from years ago and just cut and pasted it here

[TD_m0nster]

Re: 3,000 or more credit Writing tournament

Utilize your sense of Internet tone.

I didn't mean that comment to be rude.




I don't need you to ask me if I care, this isn't pre-19th amendment.

Edit your previous posts to encompass all you need to say, don't post them six different times.

Does me posting 6 different posts 6 times really affect your life that much? If so, then I truly apologize for all the anger and sorrow I've caused you.

[mead1]

Re: 3,000 or more credit Writing tournament

literature fight

[All_That_Chaz]

Re: 3,000 or more credit Writing tournament

so...

[Conorn]

Re: 3,000 or more credit Writing tournament

there once was a women from eeling.
who then had a terrible feeling.
she laid on her back.
opened her crack.
and pissed all over the ceiling.


im sorry i just had to post it, its so dam old.


ok, heres one that makes up for it.

heres a elegy.

Soldiers running through the town.
Echoes of gunfire in the background.
People fighting, crying, dying.
Peace is far from here.

Too long I have missed my mother of mine.
I sometimes wonder if I will be back in time.
The world is gone, everything is lost.
Peace is definitely far from here.

i made that last year. im very proud of it.

[Hudelf]

Re: 3,000 or more credit Writing tournament

My masterpiece:

There once was a man from Lacrass.
His balls were made out of brass.
And in stormy weather,
His balls rubbed together,
And sparks shot out of his ass.

As an aside...I hate limericks.

[summerhill]

Re: 3,000 or more credit Writing tournament

sorry guys, this contest will have to be extended until next tuesday.....im incredibly busy with sports and senior project...
use this time to submit more stories and poems

[MalReynolds]

Re: 3,000 or more credit Writing tournament

Haiku

I like your small junk
It fits nice into my hand
Ants crawl on the leaves

[TD_m0nster]

Re: 3,000 or more credit Writing tournament

Haiku

I like your small junk
It fits nice into my hand
Ants crawl on the leaves

I like your writing
Your sense of style is truly
Inspirational

(sarcasm not intended)