I didn't read the quote war, so I'm not sure if the issue has been resolved or not. Constructive criticism does not mean "good job" type comments, they are comments that can help improve your song. He might not tell you how to fix the song, but at least you know that some people may think the song is "somewhat interesting". OrganisM never insulted you, he just gave you his honest opinion and that's that.
You've got to realize that not everyone will like the song and some will say this to you.
~Tsugomaru
Originally posted by Hiluluk
WHEN do you think people die...?
When their heart is pierced by a bullet from a pistol...? No.
When they succumb to an incurable disease...? No.
When they drink soup made with a poisonous mushroom...? NO!!!
IT'S WHEN A PERSON IS FORGOTTEN...!!!
Wow, you're an ass. I know a bit about production, and much of the advice you gave him I had already given. I took the time to answer his questions and help him out, far more than you did, and you tell me I turned it into a bitchfest? Piss off, tool.
You act as if you have some sort of supreme higher power and are the only one that knows about production. You said some of the exact same things I've already said, so how are they more valid after you say them?
Haha... Buddy... Chill... I never said anything about my critiquing having been better than yours, or more valid, or anything of the sort... I never criticised your knowledge of production... And I'm glad if you feel that you were more helpful than myself...
But when I say you two turned this thread into a bitchfest, you two really DID.
Look at the last 15 posts or so. All back and forth between the two of you. Quoting eachother, tearing what the other person said and rebuting. But seriously. Look at what the topic of the last several posts were... Anything at all about His adventure song for his game? Has ANYBODY else really cared about posting at all? ...This thread has just turned into a troll-fest... It's ridiculous...
I've answered many of his questions and he's kept answering them. I merely rebutted what he'd said earlier, so I don't see this thread as simply being a troll-fest. And re-read my posts and what you said and you'll see that much of what you've said is incorrect.
When I broke his quote down, it was so that I could answer everything individually.
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Originally Posted byjewpinthethird[link]: "If you get stung by enough bees you turn into a bee,
because the venom gets into the blood stream which
spreads bee DNA throughout your entire body...
changing your genetic structure into a bee's.
Every year roughly 125 people in America are turned into bees this way."
Originally Posted byMrRubix[link]: "Do you basically bukkake-paint your walls every time you jack it?" Originally Posted byAll_That_Chaz[link]: "My pity-sex depreciates at a rate of 5% annually."
...I could care less anymore... Flyleef has gotten plenty of feedback... Near almost a full 2 pages worth of feedback... More than enough for a simple ambient background track in my opinion... I'm just gonna **** a brick if he replies only to rebute an opinion of yourse about his track, or B) if he gets mad at this post of mine and rebutes me haha
Im pretty sure youre doing your game with RPG maker.
And I'm pretty sure you didn't tell me what's wrong with the song, after voting no.
btw, it's not going to be made in RPG Maker.
No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
My heart, filled with loving radiance
Is forever thinking of you.
These words that we play are a pleasant melody
All I want is to have you by my side,
so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.
Sounds kinda interesting... I'm not sure if it'd make a good song.
Heck FFR needs some new songs anyway. I like it, it would be good for a beginning theme where the main menu is, or when you're just starting the game.
Tokens: 36
Skill Tokens: 27
Hand-type: 2-handed (3 fingered)
Best AAA: Horizon (X2.0 Mod)
Best FC: Exciting Hyper Highspeed Star v2 (not sure if that's what it's called?)
Favorite Song: Gaussain Blur
Hardest Song Passed: Caprice
And I'm pretty sure you didn't tell me what's wrong with the song, after voting no.
btw, it's not going to be made in RPG Maker.
You asked people to give their opinions, not to write essays on how to improve things.
You said "play and rate". That's what's been done.
If you want somebody to help you become a better producer/music maker, go to the proper forum.
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Originally Posted byjewpinthethird[link]: "If you get stung by enough bees you turn into a bee,
because the venom gets into the blood stream which
spreads bee DNA throughout your entire body...
changing your genetic structure into a bee's.
Every year roughly 125 people in America are turned into bees this way."
Originally Posted byMrRubix[link]: "Do you basically bukkake-paint your walls every time you jack it?" Originally Posted byAll_That_Chaz[link]: "My pity-sex depreciates at a rate of 5% annually."
No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
My heart, filled with loving radiance
Is forever thinking of you.
These words that we play are a pleasant melody
All I want is to have you by my side,
so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.
IF I CAN CLIMB A TREE, I CAN CLIMB MT EVEREST. IF I CAN DRIVE A CAR, I CAN PILOT A SPACE SHUTTLE. IF I CAN PEE, I CAN BE THE PRESIDENT. IF I CAN POO, I CAN RULE THE WORLD!
No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
My heart, filled with loving radiance
Is forever thinking of you.
These words that we play are a pleasant melody
All I want is to have you by my side,
so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.
View Poll Results: Would this song be good for a Video Game?
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Originally Posted byjewpinthethird[link]: "If you get stung by enough bees you turn into a bee,
because the venom gets into the blood stream which
spreads bee DNA throughout your entire body...
changing your genetic structure into a bee's.
Every year roughly 125 people in America are turned into bees this way."
Originally Posted byMrRubix[link]: "Do you basically bukkake-paint your walls every time you jack it?" Originally Posted byAll_That_Chaz[link]: "My pity-sex depreciates at a rate of 5% annually."
View Poll Results: Would this song be good for a Video Game?
I know that. I'm was just saying. lol
No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
My heart, filled with loving radiance
Is forever thinking of you.
These words that we play are a pleasant melody
All I want is to have you by my side,
so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.
Originally Posted byjewpinthethird[link]: "If you get stung by enough bees you turn into a bee,
because the venom gets into the blood stream which
spreads bee DNA throughout your entire body...
changing your genetic structure into a bee's.
Every year roughly 125 people in America are turned into bees this way."
Originally Posted byMrRubix[link]: "Do you basically bukkake-paint your walls every time you jack it?" Originally Posted byAll_That_Chaz[link]: "My pity-sex depreciates at a rate of 5% annually."
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