Yolomania Vol. 4 Submissions CLOSED

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  • bmah
    shots FIRED
    Profile Moderator
    FFR Simfile Author
    Global Moderator
    • Oct 2003
    • 8448

    #196
    Re: Yolomania Vol. 4 Submissions CLOSED

    Any details on what to improve on my file? It's rather vague. Would like to know a bit more on the expectations. Thx

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    • Skwid1
      FFR Player
      • Jul 2013
      • 117

      #197
      Re: Yolomania Vol. 4 Submissions CLOSED

      Originally posted by bmah
      Any details on what to improve on my file? It's rather vague. Would like to know a bit more on the expectations. Thx
      It's not so much that the file is outright bad as opposed to the song choice forcing you into making it an awkward timing file that feels unorganized to play (even though it's obviously not unorganized). The patterning/layering made it hard to get a good feel for what you're hitting notes to and it all just kind of ends up feeling like a mass of randomly timed notes with no cohesion. This is oversimplifying it and kind of exaggerating, but you get the point.

      I think that maybe using more rigid patterning to emphasize more prominent sounds would go a long way, or even denser layering, but it's not something where I could point you to a specific time in the song and be like "yep, this right here is the problem." It is a very difficult file to review in that regard. If I were to approach revising it personally, it would essentially just be me playing each 10s section in the file over and over again, adjusting patterns until it felt right.

      That said, I'm pretty sure that you could show that file to some other people and they would be all over it and think it's amazing (and on a technical level, it's pretty neat). We rejected it entirely based on the overall feeling of actually playing the chart, which is inherently kind of vague. It just didn't really gel with Wafles and I, if that makes sense.
      Last edited by Skwid1; 11-8-2015, 11:56 PM.

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      • bmah
        shots FIRED
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        • Oct 2003
        • 8448

        #198
        Re: Yolomania Vol. 4 Submissions CLOSED

        That makes sense. I'll be happy if this can find a home in another pack, because frankly I'm not annoyed at your review so much as I am for wasted productivity. I'd like to send something else in if I could've predicted that, but pack's closed.

        Yes I am pissed.
        Last edited by bmah; 11-9-2015, 02:28 AM. Reason: the truth

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        • EzExZeRo7497
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          • Dec 2010
          • 6858

          #199
          Re: Yolomania Vol. 4 Submissions CLOSED

          Just wanting to confirm, did Caliber send you guys the fixes for Frozen World, Ice Angel and Freedom Dive?

          Also nice to have a good number of charts in the pack, most of them I consider them to be some of my best

          e: Feel free to edit the preview points/lengths and the chart name/simfile artist section. Also told this to Caliber but I wasn't sure whether or not he relayed it to you guys. Mainly a concern because the preview points/chart names of my charts in Yolo3 weren't changed.
          Last edited by EzExZeRo7497; 11-9-2015, 12:22 AM.

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          • YoshL
            Celestial Harbor
            FFR Simfile Author
            FFR Music Producer
            • Aug 2008
            • 6156

            #200
            Re: Yolomania Vol. 4 Submissions CLOSED

            Originally posted by EzExZeRo7497
            a good number of them I consider them to be some of my best
            this


            Originally posted by Charu
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            • Skwid1
              FFR Player
              • Jul 2013
              • 117

              #201
              Re: Yolomania Vol. 4 Submissions CLOSED

              Originally posted by bmah
              That makes sense. I'll be happy if this can find a home in another pack, because frankly I'm not annoyed at your review so much as I am for wasted productivity. I'd like to send something else in if I could've predicted that, but pack's closed.
              Yeah trust me, rejecting that file did not feel good.

              Originally posted by EzExZeRo7497
              Just wanting to confirm, did Caliber send you guys the fixes for Frozen World, Ice Angel and Freedom Dive?
              I'll have to check for that. Wafles passed out, but I'll make note of it and we'll get it sorted out. I'll probably hit you up on skype at some point regarding that.

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              • sengoku_nadeko
                FFR Player
                • Mar 2013
                • 6

                #202
                Re: Yolomania Vol. 4 Submissions CLOSED

                Though it is rejected, but I'm glad to participate this. Yolomania 4 coming soon.

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                • -Tim-
                  FFR Simfile Author
                  FFR Simfile Author
                  • Dec 2014
                  • 425

                  #203
                  Re: Yolomania Vol. 4 Submissions CLOSED

                  Glad to have gotten at least one file in, I'm looking forward to this release


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                  • AZVW_2
                    FFR Player
                    • Jul 2015
                    • 121

                    #204
                    Re: Yolomania Vol. 4 Submissions CLOSED

                    Will enjoing full pack soon~ o/
                    Discord: AZVW_2#9373



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                    • AZVW_2
                      FFR Player
                      • Jul 2015
                      • 121

                      #205
                      Re: Yolomania Vol. 4 Submissions CLOSED

                      have any improvements on "Second Heaven (Risk Junk Remix)" here? .-. I think the song is good for here.
                      Last edited by AZVW_2; 11-9-2015, 03:52 AM.
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                      • sengoku_nadeko
                        FFR Player
                        • Mar 2013
                        • 6

                        #206
                        Re: Yolomania Vol. 4 Submissions CLOSED

                        more Bemani songs appears~ <3

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                        • AZVW_2
                          FFR Player
                          • Jul 2015
                          • 121

                          #207
                          Re: Yolomania Vol. 4 Submissions CLOSED

                          :3 I listen that and other songs everytime i'm on bus on route to somewhere.
                          Last edited by AZVW_2; 11-9-2015, 04:18 AM.
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                          • sengoku_nadeko
                            FFR Player
                            • Mar 2013
                            • 6

                            #208
                            Re: Yolomania Vol. 4 Submissions CLOSED

                            Ikr. Some files are from o!m such as GOODTEK by LeiN-

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                            • RayMix
                              FFR Player
                              • Oct 2015
                              • 2

                              #209
                              Re: Yolomania Vol. 4 Submissions CLOSED

                              The review have ended already, but can you explain the incorrect part of THENDERCRACK in batch 8?

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                              • LeiN-
                                FFR Player
                                • Jun 2015
                                • 51

                                #210
                                Re: Yolomania Vol. 4 Submissions CLOSED

                                Originally posted by sengoku_nadeko
                                Ikr. Some files are from o!m such as GOODTEK by LeiN-
                                That map was made for Yolomania 4 actually.
                                Last edited by LeiN-; 11-9-2015, 04:58 AM.

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