My Writer Side ^_^
Posted on: November 18, 2008, at 06:02:35pm

Hey I'm A Poet and I want who ever reading this to read my work and tell how you feel about it. My poetry show how I really feel about things its at www.poetry.com search under Rosemary Thomas and look for Rosemary Ann Thomas.. I have to admit some of my gammer is bad on at least two of tkem because thats when I first start writing ^_^ i touht they were good at the time.. Well enjoy and if you like it I write you one just for the heck of it ^_^

1. 1: Harp of Altara
   Posted at 7:31pm on November 18th, 2008

   Spelling and grammar do not necessarily make good poems, but I would consider refining some of them a bit. Also, I appreciate your use of parallelism, but every other line is overdoing it a bit, no? Try to shoot for a litte more complexity, too!
   With that said, I'm really no good at poetry either, so don't take my words as gospel or anything like that. "My Love" was probably my favorite out of your works.