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LMFAO My old poem from grade 6 it's cheesy+lame
Posted on: July 24, 2009, at 10:56:01pm

A FADED HELL


1-This is about a fight against the racists
A war which is in different places
This is how I feel about you
Rapin about dis is all I can do

A scar on my soul, a scar on my race
Tears my heart right to the base

2-I shot a child with my gun
This child’s life was now and done
We put the kids in residential schools
Forget your past! Those were our rules…

What was once a peaceful place, we turned into hell
This guilt and pain will mess my mind
See how war will kill man-kind

1-You killed my ma, you killed my dad
Took everything I ever had
Your people came with your guns
You got your way, you got your fun

A scar to my soul, a scar to my race
Tears my heart right to the base

2-We killed the ones who didn’t obey
Made them speak a different way
We took their language, we took their clothes
Replaced it all with what we choice

What was once a peaceful place, we turned into hell
This guilt and pain will mess my mind
See how war will kill man-kind

1-But that wasn’t all, you weren’t done
Put me in a school, treated like a useless tool
Once we were there you violated us
Hit us till we turned to dust

A scar on my soul a scar on my race
Tears my heart right to the base


1-Once I escaped this awful place
I heard a shot, my friend was bleeding
Just a kid I started pleading
This man brought my home, he rebuilded my life
He became my friend who was no longer a foe
Guess they weren’t all bad, this we need to know…

2-Now that this hell has vanished into the past
Peace lives again once at last
We mustn’t forget who we’ve hurt
Burry the memories under the dirt… (pause) 2x

WORST POEM EVER MADE!!! hahah