The Last Peaceful Day (my homemade itachi poem)

The last peaceful day i lie in my bed,
too many thoughts just cluttered my head.
I walked through the town, head in my hand,
I knew it was time, the end of the clan.
At the end of my trip I went into action,
There was no time to think it's a horrible passion.
I withdrew my kunai and razored them with full might,
They got on their knees before dying immoblized with fright.
I walked to my house parents stunned with fear the last words were "no please, no dear."
I seuthed out of town, moon in the sky,
all of my clan fell, bleed, and died...

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The last peaceful day i lie in my bed,
too many thoughts just cluttered my head.
I walked through the town, head in my hand,
I knew it was time, the end of the clan.
At the end of my trip I went into action,
There was no time to think it's a horrible passion.
I withdrew my kunai and razored them with full might,
They got on their before dying immoblized with fright.
I walked to my house parents stunned with fear the last words were "no please, no dear."
I seuthed out of town, moon in the sky,
all of my clan fell, bleed, and died...

do you like it please post on my profile if u read this plz plz plz i wanna kno if it's good.