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Death of a Strawberry :: FFR Batch Submission
Pizza69 -
Death of a Strawberry -
Dance Gavin Dance [7.75 / 10]
Autumn 2024 Seasonal Batch
PublicTokenPurchasedSecretEvents
Released
Rise Records perms
i believe denial makes me hella intelligent
Simfile Folder Name
Death of a Strawberry (Pizza69)Note Count
1928Chart Length
4:01Average NPS
8.0805Estimated Difficulty
66.01
First Note
0:03Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x -18
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 32 4 - 54Jumps
x 511
Hands
x 28
Quads
x 1
Color Jumps
x 0
Color Hands
x 0
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second7 - 21.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
9 - 18.00 nps 1 Second
15 - 15.00 nps 2 Seconds
26 - 13.00 nps 5 Seconds
62 - 12.40 nps 10 Seconds
119 - 11.90 nps 30 Seconds
338 - 11.27 nps 1 Minute
552 - 9.20 nps
Color Count
x 746 (38.69%)
x 629 (32.62%)
x 1 (0.05%)
x 524 (27.18%)
x 1 (0.05%)
x 14 (0.73%)
x 0 (0%)
x 9 (0.47%)
x 4 (0.21%)
Posted at 12:23am on January 6th, 2025
Death of a Strawberry (Pizza69) [7.5/10]
>Perms, metadata, sync good
0.274/7.954 - Why are these jumps, but not 1.954/3.874/5.794/"etc of intro"? Same thing happens in 2:03.154
23.554 - Missing note. Vocal. Compare 15.873
30.994 - Should be hand. CymbalCrash
37.714 - Why jump? No Vocal
38.074-38.434 - I guess HardSnare is jump here? And previous snares were singles b/c they were soft?
38.434 - Should be diff jump pattern. Diff pitch than 38.194
2:10.114 - Should be jump. Guitar is still lingering here
2:41.554 - Should be hand. Compare 46.354/54.034
2:54.994-2:56.674 - Why is the PR so different when compared to 1:07.474-1:09.154?
2:56.914-2:58.834 - Might want to replicate this pattern onto 1:09.394-1:11.314
>>Straightforward & mostly consistent
Judge Score: 7.50 - Change Recommended
Posted at 7:13am on April 23rd, 2025
Permission: good
Metadata: good
Sync: good
- 16.954: Not same pitch as 16.594.
- 61.954: More of a subjective note but this transition feels a little strange going from jumps to the kick/snare into jumps to the voice. Maybe something like making 62.674(and other instances) a hand where the jump to the voice and the snare converge could work. Again, more of a subjective note since there is a very clear transition in the song warranting the change in structure.
- 129.634: Could make this a [23] jack into [14] jack to signify kick repeating -> snare repeating. This would also fix the issue of 130.354 being the same jump while being a different sound.
- 134.314: Could put on [4] for PR.
- Song mostly repeats from here, the song is fairly repetitive as a result. You could highlight the changes in the song in the second half like 138.274 by making them jumps, I'm surprised you didn't put a jump to this tbh :P instances like 140.434, 142.354 etcetera you have no notes, I think following the vocals here would at least distinguish it a little bit from the first half.
- 207.634(etc.): I'm surprised this isn't a double minijack, I guess you put the 16th on [4] because of the snare, but you could make it a [14] to highlight the bass guitar repeating and the snare at the same time. It's only 125 bpm.
Fairly flawless file in terms of structure, it gets a little repetitive, but that's fine. Plays a bit like a storn file.
Judge Score: 8.00 - Accepted
Posted at 11:39am on May 25th, 2025
Checking in on the status of this submission, as it's past the 1 month probationary period with a "Change Recommended" flag, but there's been no acknowledgment of judge notes or fixes submitted.
Files/Songs with the "Change Recommended" tag require at a minimum a response from the Stepauthor in order to continue through the submission system.
I will check back on this at a later date. If it does not receive a response or fix by then, it could risk rejection (unless judges wanna argue the decision since one is CR and the other is accepted).
Posted at 12:57am on May 27th, 2025
will try to get fixes in on the weekend, but rhythm games have been far from my mind lately so i'm fine with this going in as-is if i forget