Fuzzy-Navel :: FFR Batch Submission
Tru - Fuzzy-Navel - *wakadori [7 / 10]
Autumn 2024 Seasonal Batch
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Simfile Folder Name

Fuzzy-Navel (Tru)

Note Count

1067

Chart Length

2:12

Average NPS

8.3555

Estimated Difficulty

62.17

First Note

0:04

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -1

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 15 4 - 4

Jumps

x 158

Hands

x 17

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 0

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
8 - 24.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
9 - 18.00 nps 1 Second
17 - 17.00 nps 2 Seconds
31 - 15.50 nps 5 Seconds
63 - 12.60 nps 10 Seconds
112 - 11.20 nps 30 Seconds
294 - 9.80 nps 1 Minute
548 - 9.13 nps

Color Count

x 327 (30.65%)
x 232 (21.74%)
x 10 (0.94%)
x 427 (40.02%)
x 51 (4.78%)
x 5 (0.47%)
x 15 (1.41%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)

Largest Note Gaps

0.6s0.6s0.6s0.53s0.43s0.43s0.43s0.43s
35
28
21
14
7

Permission: good
Metadata: good
Sync: good

- 16.757: Pattern here makes more sense as something like [3][1][2][4 or 3]
- 19.523: This pattern should be different from 18.778, lower pitch.
- 25.800: I'm not sure if this is part of the melody, it's kinda hard to hear.
- 25.906: PR here is a bit backwards, it should be more like [3][1][2]
- 27.608: I kinda wish these jumps were PR'd a little better, maybe something like [14] for 27.608 and [13] for 27.927?
- 28.140: I feel this kick is bass-y enough to be included since half of this bassline seems to be kicks.
- 32.289: Missing note to bass.
- 33.246: Why is this kick included?
- 37.076: On top of this clap(?) there's also melody, I think it's worth including.
- 38.778: Is this going to the clap or the bass? If it's going to the bass you're missing notes at 38.885 and 39.098.
- 42.076: Missing note to scratch.
- 44.027: Is there a grace note here? I can't hear one.
- 47.821: PR here is pretty bad, I suggest something like [3][2][1][3][1][4].
- 48.672: Missing piano note.
- 51.225: This anchor on [4] feels a bit strange since the pitch changes alot here, I'd suggest something like [1][2][3][4][1][2-3][3-4]
- 56.544: Not hearing this 16th note.
- 57.608: This note is markedly different in pitch from 57.395, I'd suggest putting this on [1] and turning the subsequent notes into a 1-2-3-4 pattern.
- 66.438 - 68.778: It's not very clear to me what constitutes a jump here.
- 81.225: Ghost note? Don't really hear the saxophone/trumpet here.
*** 90.268 - 96.012: This section feels pretty weird to me due to its layering, kick + trumpet = jump, but just kick = nothing? 91.012 is kick + trumpet being a jump, but just kick at 91.119 is empty and then at 94.417 trumpet + kick is single into just kick being nothing again at 94.842. 93.140 is just the trumpet and it's a jump as well. This part feels really confusing layering wise I can't make sense of it.
- 121.651: No grace here?
- 128.034: This section is too jump heavy imo, nothing is really highlighted here due to everything being a jump. I would understand if it was all very intense and loud, but the music actually seems to calm down a little here. I would suggest making all the kicks(128.034, 128.566, 128.672, 129.310) single in this section so the other sounds stand out more.

This file is really fun, but it does have some issues structurally and some minor errors. Hopefully my notes can help you iron out some of the inconsistencies and layering issues. FR for note @ 90.268, but the file as a whole could use some work, so please take all my notes into account.

Judge Score: 7.00 - Fixes Required

Permission good (BOF)
Sync good
Metadata good

- 16.331: different pitch from 16.118
- 23.033, 23.246: missing
- 25.800: ghost?
- 26.225: missing?
- 28.140: missing
- 29.735: jump
- 33.246, 38.778: they are the only kicks included in this section. Also 38.352-38.991 is stepped differently from 31.544-32.182
- 50.799: flam? (see 43.991)
- 48.672, 50.693, 52.608, 54.097, 55.267, 56.757: missing. Could be seen as a stylistic choice though, but 52.608 sounds quite similar to 52.395
- 1:11.118, 1:21.225: ghost
- 1:15.693, 1:19.097: flam
- 1:30.214: could go to .196 for consistent flam
- 1:52.395: no jump, & 1:52.324 should be flam
- 1:52.714: missing
* 2:05.586-2:07.714: a bit spiky due to its density and a column 3 anchor. 2:06.969 and 2:07.182 could be nerfed to singles

On one hand, technicality and consistency could be improved. On the other hand, underlayering does sometimes warrant omitting something that was stepped before for balance, so there could be a bit more leeway in that aspect. All in all, it's a fun file and I'd say good enough with some general cleanup.

Judge Score: 7.00 - Change Recommended