The Singing Swan :: FFR Batch Submission
M0nkeyz - The Singing Swan - Fractal Dreamers [7.75 / 10]
Autumn 2024 Seasonal Batch
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Simfile Folder Name

The Singing Swan (M0nkeyz)

Note Count

1344

Chart Length

2:14

Average NPS

10.2413

Estimated Difficulty

71.54

First Note

0:03

Ending Note Delay

0:06

Hand Bias

x -4

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 27 4 - 30

Jumps

x 272

Hands

x 81

Quads

x 5

Color Jumps

x 1

Color Hands

x 1

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
8 - 24.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
12 - 24.00 nps 1 Second
19 - 19.00 nps 2 Seconds
34 - 17.00 nps 5 Seconds
73 - 14.60 nps 10 Seconds
135 - 13.50 nps 30 Seconds
381 - 12.70 nps 1 Minute
705 - 11.75 nps

Color Count

x 507 (37.72%)
x 332 (24.7%)
x 4 (0.3%)
x 382 (28.42%)
x 6 (0.45%)
x 33 (2.46%)
x 9 (0.67%)
x 13 (0.97%)
x 58 (4.32%)

Largest Note Gaps

6s2.67s0.5s0.47s0.47s0.47s0.47s0.47s
35
28
21
14
7

The Singing Swan (M0nkeyz) [7.5/10, CQ/FR]
>Perms, sync, metadata good

- 00:09.949 There is a muted 8th bass here, same with 00:11.795, and 00:13.641 where it's most notable. There is also one at 00:08.102, but there is a 64th there close enough to account for it that's following another instrument.
- 00:25.641 Not the biggest fan of the minijacks here to the underlying sound, but I guess it's correct.
- 00:32.218 There is such a notable sound that this [34] jump is going to, that it doesn't make too much sense PR-wise for the 8th [34] immediately after it to share the same PR.
- 01:16.641 I get the reasoning to fall back to singles here for the 32nd, but where does that put layering such-as 01:01.872, 01:09.256 or 00:54.602 at? Needs more layering consistency in this section in-regards to 32nds.
- 01:19.641 Personally I find each of these 1-4 trills, split by the [23] jump, very different sounding from one another, and would've put them in different columns from each other.
- 01:22.756 & 01:22.987 Missing 16ths around the [24] 8th going into the quad.
- 01:36.948 Really don't know how to feel about these instances of 4-long jacks when there isn't really anything making it stick out or behave differently from a similar-sounding section such-as 01:38.795 for example. Really feels like filler for the sake of climax theory, especially right at 02:03.026 which can really trip up some people.

At the very minimum, would like a look again at the 32nds mid-way through the file at timecode [01:16.641] and get them structured and in-order. I suppose jack difficulty is fine comparative to some of the stuff earlier in the file like 00:22.179, really just 32nds that stick out hardest here.

Judge Score: 7.50 - Fixes Required

The Singing Swan (M0nkeyz) [8/10]
>Perms, metadata, sync good

7.929 - Sounds closer to 7.949
20.449 - Why is this a jump, but not 20.333?
21.141 - Why jump?
24.314/24.545/24.776 - Technically closer to 64th graces
25.872/29.564 - Should be hand. Compare 26.333
26.795-27.199 - Technically 48ths, but intentionally nerfed. Anyways, shouldn't this be white-noted? Compare 26.208-26.266
28.237 - Missing grace note. Compare 24.545
36.487-36.891 - Technically not 32nds. Should be white-noted
54.487-54.602/etc - Technically not 32nds. White-note?
1:10.525 - Missing note
1:23.333 - Missing note. Compare 1:27.025
1:30.487 - Why no quad? Compare 1:23.102/1:26.795
1:51.256 - Why is this a hand?

>>S&C

Judge Score: 8.00 - Accepted

- 9.949: Not hearing those sorry, or I'm not hearing distinct notes here.
- 32.218: changed.
- 76.641: Made them all singles
- 79.641: Fair enough, changed it up a little.
- 82.756 & 82.987: I'm not really following the tom-like sounds in this section, there too faint and would detract from the actual important sounds I'm trying to highlight (the hi-hat/cymbal sounds)
- 96.948: There's some high frequency distortion on the sounds I highlighted as jacks. It's also observable on the wavetable.
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7.929: Fixed
20.449: I'm not really hearing the big kick on this one and I like how I highlight the syncopation with this.
21.141: Snare/kick thing?
24.314/24.545/24.776: It plays a bit better to me as 32nds
25.872/29.564: Done for difficulty concerns
26.795-27.199: It's quite a bit louder and therfore warrants a different coloration imo
28.237: Fixed
36.487-36.891: Why?
70.525: Don't think it's prominent enough to include because the sound is obfuscated by the sound I'm highlighting with the white note.
83.333: Added.
90.487: Ooops added.
111.256: Made regular jump.

Gonna look over some things one last time later myself to see if my file is consistent after these changes, but this is what I've changed so far.

FR Flag cleared.

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1338 => 1344
AVG NPS changed: 10.19558 => 10.2413
Hand Bias changed: -12 => -4