6.5/10

First Impressions:

This feels too jack heavy for the song, I also found some stuff to feel strangely empty, the chart itself is fun overall, but I feel it has problems.

- 3.238: Pitch wise this should probably be [4], so the sequence would be [4][4][1][4] and then you could make the hand a [123]
- 17.793, 21.080 (etc.): Don't really like the 24ths here, the bass notes here are actually 32nds, but I feel the most difficulty friendly / accurate pattern would be to actually just make it two 16ths.
- 19.574: Feels a bit weird to have this jack on the same column as the next one since one is following the drums and the other is following the steelpan(?).
- 28.204: It feels wrong to have this be such a continuous roll when 28.306 is a different instrument from the rest of the notes.
- 29.437: This shouldn't be a jack.
- 31.902: This is a very forced hard pattern, the pitch isn't repeating, I think you should change this to something like [2][134].
- 33.341: Why is this note included? You don't include notes like 33.135 etc.
- 35.190: Again, very hard glutty pattern, it feels very forced since the sounds aren't really repeating.
- 38.889: Pitch here feels really off, having the two [24] jumps especially so close to eachother when they're different in pitch.
- 42.587: Kind of a pitch issue here too, the jumps should probably have more of a descending motion.
- 48.649: This should not jack, I would put this particular 16th on [2] here. Otherwise this jacks throws the whole sequence off for me.
- 53.169: Jumps here, but no jumps at 49.882 for example?
- 58.409: The halved bpm seems somewhat random since early instances of these repeating drum sounds haven't been colored this way and I find it a bit strange that the repeating drums aren't stepped as jacks here, particularly 58.409 and 58.820.
- 60.464: Similar sounds ARE stepped as jacks here, with a different color(no halved bpm).
- 62.724: This section feels off, I think it's because you follow the drums and melody a bit arbitrarily, for example 62.827 follows a snare, but 62.930 which is a note to the melody is left empty while 63.032, 63.238 etc. seem to follow the melody exclusively.
- 64.882: This feels like a ghost note, since you're not exactly following the drums here.
- 65.806: Why this minijack?
- 66.115: This should be more like a [1][2][1] than a jack.
- 66.628: Should probably be a triple jack, although that might be deliberately not stepped that way.
- 67.758: Shouldn't be a jack PR wise.
- 73.615: I feel these should actually be jacks here.
- 79.882: See 48.649.
- 84.916: Bit of an arbitrary jack again since the sound isn't actually repeating.

Rest of the chart kinda repeats itself again. The ending is good, not much to criticize there. There seems to be a consistent thing with jack files you make where I don't exactly see the justification for alot of the jacks, pitch usually isn't repeating and it feels made hard for the sake of being hard. The energy for a difficult file is there, but I feel some of the jacks are arbitrary here. Don't get me wrong there are repeating sounds that I think warrant jacks in this file, but with almost everything being jacks the structure becomes a bit of a mess.

Judge Score: 6.50 - Rejected