End Time :: FFR Batch Submission
TheTrueXfish - End Time - Cres [7.25 / 10]
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Absolute classic rhythm game song somehow not in FFR yet, but after realizing how tough this was to get even decently correct maybe I understand why it wasn't in yet. Anyway I think this could be better off as like a token or something due to the section in the middle with the jacks, although this is by no means the spikiest jack section in the game.

Simfile Folder Name

End Time (TheTrueXfish)

Note Count

1327

Chart Length

2:11

Average NPS

10.4051

Estimated Difficulty

79.98

First Note

0:04

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x 57

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 8 3 - 54 4 - 2

Jumps

x 399

Hands

x 0

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 0

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
8 - 24.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
12 - 24.00 nps 1 Second
24 - 24.00 nps 2 Seconds
44 - 22.00 nps 5 Seconds
92 - 18.40 nps 10 Seconds
164 - 16.40 nps 30 Seconds
466 - 15.53 nps 1 Minute
902 - 15.03 nps

Color Count

x 529 (39.86%)
x 356 (26.83%)
x 37 (2.79%)
x 350 (26.38%)
x 34 (2.56%)
x 18 (1.36%)
x 1 (0.08%)
x 1 (0.08%)
x 1 (0.08%)

Largest Note Gaps

4s1.47s1.33s1.33s1.33s1.33s1.33s1.33s
35
28
21
14
7

End Time (TheTrueXFish) [7.5/10, CQ/FR*]
>Perms, metadata, sync good

29.618/30.118 - Missing note. BackgroundSynth
30.701-31.201 - Fill in the 16ths. BackgroundSynth
34.368-34.660 - I suggest changing this to 43124312 to express the increased intensity of the fade-in noise (especially when compared to 34.035-34.326)
*56.035-1:16.701 - The jacks are fine, but I'd like more meaning behind the jumps (it's just jump spam on the synth atm). I suggest having "Kick = Jump, Synth = Single"
1:35.701/1:36.868 - Should be jump
*1:49.368-1:57.368 - This section is the only one that has piano on the jumps. All the other sections have jumps on the kick. For the sake of consistency, the jumps in this section should be on the kicks like on 13.368-23.201
1:58.118/1:58.451 - Could be jump
2:03.701-2:04.035 - This should not be the same pattern as 2:01.035-2:01.368 since they both have diff pitches
2:07.076 - Should have same jump pattern as 2:05.590 since they both are the same noise

>>Straightforward & mostly consistent. See asterisks

Judge Score: 7.50 - Fixes Required

End Time (TheTrueXfish)

- Offset's good.

23.535 - Feels more of a ghost note than not.

*The jumpstream portion of this is generally fine, but take care to not create a 3-note implicit anchors/jacks like the one on 24.285 or 24.951 - it's not that they are super spiky or anything, but the song itself is fairly dynamic that I feel it's not really that appropriate to the musical cue.

44.035 - Shouldn't be a jump here - it's not a full piano chord being played.
1:25.535 - 5-note long anchor for these 24th streams, try moving some of it elsewhere.
*1:27.951 - 4-note long anchor on consecutive jumpstream here.
1:36.368~1:37.035 - These 4ths aren't jumps, they are not played in full with the kicks.
**1:43.368 - The focus is getting pretty blurry on whether you are following the piano solo or the percussion - I completely hear the 24th-32ndish piano here and you're opting for the rapid kicks - which one exactly are you following from the start of 1:17.368?
1:59.368 - I honestly disagree with using 32nd rolls here, the kicks are loud enough to overshadow the piano cues so continuing your 16th jumptrills feel more apt than not.

Chart is generally fine, though at times it's not really faithful in following certain instruments (mostly piano) but understandable for a song that existed in a long while. Definitely something of a fit for FFR, but it needs fixes on * and **'s here. The ** is something to consider as piano is the centerpiece of the song so having to leave them as such is quite blatant when playing it back-to-back. [7*/10, Fixes Required]

Judge Score: 7.00 - Fixes Required

I keep forgetting to update, I'm almost done with fixes so please hold on just a bit longer..

Been half a year, rejecting based on no update for Fixes Required flag.

If fixes happen to be applied, please consider re-submission to a currently open batch.