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ositzxz369 - Stop Shivering - Terminal 11 [7.25 / 10]

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I stepped this song mostly on 100% speed. So if there were any subtle glitch noises that were audible in like 70% speed but not in 100% speed, then I omitted them. File could be harder through greater expression on the louder sections. Terminal 11 - is in the "FlashFlashRevolution v9 Permissions Spreadsheet"

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Simfile Folder Name

Stop Shivering (ositzxz369)

Note Count

1521

Chart Length

2:33

Average NPS

10.1243

Estimated Difficulty

86.79

First Note

0:03

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -25

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 1 3 - 177 4 - 31

Jumps

								x 341
							

Hands

								x 21
							

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 2

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
12 - 36.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
13 - 26.00 nps 1 Second
21 - 21.00 nps 2 Seconds
35 - 17.50 nps 5 Seconds
77 - 15.40 nps 10 Seconds
145 - 14.50 nps 30 Seconds
381 - 12.70 nps 1 Minute
714 - 11.90 nps

Color Count

x 326 (21.43%)

x 370 (24.33%)

x 2 (0.13%)

x 400 (26.3%)

x 3 (0.2%)

x 103 (6.77%)

x 2 (0.13%)

x 1 (0.07%)

x 314 (20.64%)

Largest Note Gaps

2s1.6s1.6s0.8s0.8s0.8s0.8s0.6s

removed the mines

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Permission good (blanket)
Sync good
Metadata good

Layering... is hard to discern due to the nature of the song. It generally makes sense so I won't be nitpicking jump usages throughout.

- 0.862: should be white
- 30.662-.962: what are those minijacks for?
- 36.861, 37.662, 37.861(unsure), 41.961: white
- 56.662: ugh okay
* 1:01.261-1:02.461: there's a lot going on here, namely the S-shaped minijack at 1:01.662 and very tricky left hand right after it. The last 32nd at 1:02.412 is not audible to me at 100% speed, and if it's removed and 1:02.461 is changed to [14] it would be a lot more manageable.
- 1:16.062: white
- 1:17.362: another S-shaped minijack

- 1:38.862: white here, not 1:39.053
* 1:34.661: suggest breaking the column 2 jack instead of 4 to avoid the long anchor
- 1:59.661, 2:01.262, 2:06.062, 2:07.661, 2:12.462, 2:14.062, : white

I stopped shivering. The spikes at *s are not too severe, but could benefit from a bit of cleanup.

Judge Score: 7.50 - Change Recommended

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Stop Shivering - 7/10 (Fixes Required)

Perms are good
Metadata is good
Sync is good enough but I would recommend -0.064 for better accuracy. With the 192nd early color theoried notes it does create a noticeable desync with the waveform. (though realistically still hard to notice while playing)

00:03.953 - Consider moving to 3, theres no repeated sound to justify the minijack and the same-hand transition into the 4jack is really abrasive.

00:04.053 - This 4jack is kinda flimsy, the sound isn't really repeating and the rhythm breaks into 32nds @ 00:04.312. Consider breaking it into a 3jack and following the full 32nds as its pretty noticeably missing.

00:14.261 - Is this 3jack really nessecary?

00:25.962 - The previous sample repeats a third time here, consider including.

00:35.314 - Missing 32nd vocal sample.

00:36.864 - Should be a jump for the layered sound and its missing your grey note color theory on the melody

00:56.164 - Should be on column 4 like the previous 4th for the sake of PR.

**00:56.564 -> 00:57.064 - This is a bit *too* abrasive of a difficulty spike, particularly the awkward one-hand trill into the split jumpjack. At the very least this jumpjack needs to be one-handed and the 3jack out of the onehanded minitrill alleviated. Points for uniqueness though.

**01:34.062 - Please, take some of the heat off of the left hand here. Minitrill into a 4jack is unfriendly to put it lightly.

01:47.262 -> 01:58.461 - Very tasteful use of minimalism here.

In your typical fashion is a rather aggressive jacky file and I like most of whats going on here- also nice application of color theory on the melody. I think some aspects of your approach to layer or omit notes get a little muddy, but I'm opting not to get lost in the weeds on that- I could typically pick up on your reasoning. For the love of Aaron Funk, please take a bit of the heat off the starred notes.

Judge Score: 7.00 - Fixes Required

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Any timestamps not mentioned here means it's implemented. Anyways...

To jh05013~

30.662-30.962 - 30.662 is actually diff noise, so I'll move that to [1], but 30.862-30.962 are the same noise
56.662 - Nerfed the pattern. Recheck here
*1:01.261-1:02.461 - Removed 1:02.412, but can I keep 1:02.461 as [24] to differentiate the noise from 1:02.062-1:02.162?
1:17.362 - What do you want to suggest here? I could change 1:17.462 to [23] and 1:17.512 to [1] to avoid the S-shaped minijack
*1:34.661 - Break the [2] jack, but not the [4] jack... so you want to change this [23] into a [34]? Avoid a long anchor by making a longer 5-note anchor on [4]??

To Lights~

14.261 - K, avoided 3jack by moving 14.261 to [3]
25.962 - So 3jacks are fine, but just not when it was on 14.261? Recheck here
35.314 - Also added 35.412. Recheck here
56.164 - This note (which is the fade-in noise) should be lower PR than 56.261. So [1] here is fine
**56.564-57.064 - Nerfed the pattern. Recheck here
**1:34.062 - K, nerfed the minitrill

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Note Count changed: 1518 => 1521
AVG NPS changed: 10.10428 => 10.12425
Hand Bias changed: -24 => -17

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I'm happy with that. Moved to Accept.

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would like to hear jh's thoughts first before finalizing

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Looks good to me.

For 1:17.362, I was thinking of something like changing 1:17.562-1:17.612 to 42, though it could just be my personal bias.

For 1:34.661, column 2 has a longer anchor if you include 1:34.161-1:34.312; they are slower, but make the jack harder to prepare for. Though I guess a bigger problem was the minitrill that Lights pointed out, and the current version seems fine.

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fixed minor white note jumpjack PR on 1:38.462-1:39.161

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Hand Bias changed: -17 => -25

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