Accidentally Shedding My Skin :: FFR Batch Submission
M0nkeyz - Accidentally Shedding My Skin - Sintel [7 / 10]
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Simfile Folder Name

Accidentally Shedding My Skin (M0nkeyz)

Note Count

1201

Chart Length

2:05

Average NPS

9.7854

Estimated Difficulty

75.98

First Note

0:02

Ending Note Delay

0:02

Hand Bias

x -13

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 6 4 - 91

Jumps

x 318

Hands

x 28

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 2

Color Hands

x 1

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
10 - 30.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
13 - 26.00 nps 1 Second
22 - 22.00 nps 2 Seconds
38 - 19.00 nps 5 Seconds
81 - 16.20 nps 10 Seconds
156 - 15.60 nps 30 Seconds
395 - 13.17 nps 1 Minute
650 - 10.83 nps

Color Count

x 469 (39.05%)
x 381 (31.72%)
x 15 (1.25%)
x 256 (21.32%)
x 18 (1.5%)
x 32 (2.66%)
x 12 (1%)
x 2 (0.17%)
x 16 (1.33%)

Largest Note Gaps

1.8s1.3s1.27s1.2s1.13s1.13s1.07s1s
35
28
21
14
7

Accidentally Shedding My Skin (M0nkeyz) [7/10]
>Perms & sync good
>Please put your name in the metadata

12.525-12.837/13.775-13.931/44.255-44.688/45.409-45.842 - Can do PR here
17.056/25.025 - Should be hand. Compare 17.837. Please recheck the whole file for this noise
17.993 - Same hand pattern, but diff pitch than 17.837? Compare 25.806-25.962
33.462/36.509/41.197/1:21.128/1:23.938/1:25.452/1:28.265 - Shouldn't this be a single? It's just one noise
43.102 - Should be [12] for better PR
45.698 - Missing note. Compare 43.390
51.323 - Should be hand. Compare 48.150. See comment for 17.056
54.852/57.015 - Missing note
56.511-56.944 - I'm pretty sure there's a more technically accurate PR pattern for these 24ths
57.228 - Should be jump. Compare 54.925
1:38.796-1:38.974/1:41.653-1:41.832/1:44.510-1:44.689 - Can do PR here. Compare 1:35.939-1:36.117
1:56.207/1:57.992 - Missing note

>>Ehh

Judge Score: 7.00 - Change Recommended

Accidentally Shedding My Skin
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** Sync issue in intro:
→ 3.683-5.752 is 145 bpm, not 140. Drifts ~45 ms offsync.
→ 9.858 also seems to finish just about exactly a 48th note early (28 ms).

15.806: Jump?
35.338 etc: PR is very noticeably backwards on these two jumps. Perhaps move the preceding 3/16th anchor to column 3 to help fix this.
43.679-44.256: Not a fan of the white 16ths here. The latter set is easier to figure out, but without slowing the song down, I find it really hard to discern what’s different about the triplet at 43.823 compared to the barren 42.669.
46.131: Similar thing here, but this might be more subjective--I have a really hard time discerning the first two 16ths in this trill at full speed.
** 56.511: This is both pretty spiky and pretty clearly a (heavily distorted) 16th rhythm. Please change this up. My personal suggestion would be an awkward dense 16th JS burst, something like this: https://i.imgur.com/tu4kUA9.png
57.445: ow
63.548: A bit sad this is omitted.
91.506: I think some people may hate this suggestion, but given that the 24th sound is still playing here, I might prefer at least these first two 32nd patterns (i.e. probably not the white-note one) be changed into split rolls to kinaesthetically differentiate them from the 24th roll before. The change in patterning would draw much more attention to the new sound.
* 107.368-115.939: Given that you’ve just spent so much time following similar gallops to these with two jumps, it feels pretty unintuitive dropping the first note of each down to singles for this jumpstream. Considering the complexity of some of the earlier bursts (incl. 32nds) at 208 bpm earlier in the file, I don’t think a denser jumpstream at 168 bpm would be a huge spike to finish the file off.

This feels like an ositz song. And an ositz title. And kind of like an ositz file, but with way more difficulty concessions and avoidance of jacks. There are a couple places where the chart absolutely lets loose, though, which feels odd to me--the difficulty curve is definitely a bit uneven. FR on the intro sync and the 56.511 pattern; I would also like to see the ending jumpstream buffed up to better represent the gallop rhythm, but I won’t force it. [7/10 FR]

Judge Score: 7.00 - Fixes Required

Fixed sync issue in intro

ositz:
- 12.525-12.837/13.775-13.931/44.255-44.688/45.409-45.842: You mean the background melody? I'm following the drums here.
- 17.056/25.025: 17.838 is way louder..
- 17.993: Fixed
- 33.462/36.509/41.197/1:21.128/1:23.938/1:25.452/1:28.265: I'm stepping all of these snares as jumps here.
- 43.102: Aren't they all snares?
- 45.698: Removed both of them since they're following the melody when I'm focusing on the drums here.
- 51.323: Fixed.
- 54.852/57.015: Added.
- 56.511-56.944 Okidoki.
- 57.228: Added
- 98.796-98.974/101.653-101.832/104.510-104.689: done.
- 116.207/117.992: Done, not sure about 117.992 tho.

Pizza:

- 15.806: Sure
- 35.338: Fixed
- 43.679-44.256: Removed
- 46.131: Hearing these quite clearly.
- ** 56.511: Turned them into white 16ths
- 57.445: my apologies lol, changed
- 63.548: Added tho it is a little faint in my opinion.
- 91.506: Made the 24ths split rolls instead.
- 107.368-115.939: Not entirely sure what you want me to turn into jumps here(I turned the very first note of the JS into a jump tho), I feel my structure is pretty clean so I'll leave most of it as is

In addition to these notes I felt the section from 95.939 - 107.368 felt really off, I removed some of the jumps to the snares and it feels alot better now, but I'm curious as to what you guys think. I'm pretty much only following the kicks now.

Thanks for the notes guys!

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1210 => 1201
AVG NPS changed: 9.85877 => 9.78544
Hand Bias changed: -30 => -13

@ositz @pizza fixes ok? Good to go?

Assuming this is good to go.