Q33B :: FFR Batch Submission
Gradiant - Q33B - Lamanya [7.5 / 10]
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- The sim folder name isn't as expected: "Q33B (Gradiant & Deamerai)" vs "Q33B (Gradiant)"

✔️ The stepauthor has acknowledged the judges notes.

✔️ This chart has been marked as final and shouldn't receive any more changes.

- This file is a collaboration between multiple authors / stepauthors.

Simfile Folder Name

Q33B (Gradiant & Deamerai)

Note Count

1897

Chart Length

2:07

Average NPS

15.3272

Estimated Difficulty

98.97

First Note

0:03

Ending Note Delay

0:03

Hand Bias

x -11

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 43 3 - 161 4 - 379

Jumps

x 449

Hands

x 28

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 13

Color Hands

x 1

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
12 - 36.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
16 - 32.00 nps 1 Second
31 - 31.00 nps 2 Seconds
61 - 30.50 nps 5 Seconds
126 - 25.20 nps 10 Seconds
241 - 24.10 nps 30 Seconds
668 - 22.27 nps 1 Minute
1093 - 18.22 nps

Color Count

x 636 (33.53%)
x 438 (23.09%)
x 192 (10.12%)
x 493 (25.99%)
x 40 (2.11%)
x 33 (1.74%)
x 2 (0.11%)
x 18 (0.95%)
x 45 (2.37%)

Largest Note Gaps

2.5s2.5s1.83s1s0.97s0.77s0.63s0.6s
35
28
21
14
7

Removed the 2 1-framers

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1897 => 1895
AVG NPS changed: 15.32723 => 15.31107
Hand Bias changed: -15 => -13

Removed .old file

A new chart file was uploaded.

Approved for upper-90s bounty. Cleared for judgement.

Q33B (Gradiant & Deamerai) [7/10]

PERMS OK
SYNC OK

12.756-23.506: The hihats here are well charted, but they do become quite blurry and more of a background sound at times, like around 15.381 & 16.756. Fine as is, just not ideal. I suppose it's mostly due to these hihats being 100% left pan, which makes them being the main layering slightly odd.

30.662: Could make this a 234 in 3/64ths up to the 4th.

31.224: Lmao.

37.568: This minijack doesn't quite fit. The motif here is minijacks on the chopped vocals.

38.193 & 38.256: PR, 21 would be better given 38.006.

40.006: Meh, 31.224 was alright but this for just the fast hihats feels less justified. Make it 2 handed similarly to 38.881.

41.506-51.006: This has me so confused in terms of layering. Just at 41.256, the melody was prioritized over the drums, and even at 43.443 and 43.964 for example. But then, at 46.006 that melody is ignored, and at 47.089-49.881 it's completely gone just to reappear on these 24ths rolls. Very unintuitive and confusing.

47.224: This doesn't work. At most if it's going to vocals, the last 32nd should be removed.

1:18.506: Would probably be nicer to hit this transition if the second minijack was on the opposite hand of the triplet start. Would suggest 4422(14)32 (14)32 (34).

1:20.672: Pretty awkward patterning here introducing the 12ths polys on the left hand doing a 21 121 1 2 from 4th to 4th. This 12th can probably just be omitted to properly end the repeating 64th triplets motif and transition into the 12ths poly stuff.

1:23.631: Missing 24ths here.

This chart has really good elements and not so good ones. Overall, nothing requires a major redo/fix so it will be a CR from me, but the layering of the drums vs the melody is not great, so I'd highly recommend seeing if changes to that can be done. If not, that's probably fine; the way it's done is consistent for the most part (41.506-51.006 is meh but it does match the way the ending js ignores most of the melody/bleepbloops too). That being said, there's a decent amount of challenging tech bits with the polys, minijacks, minitrills, and also a refreshing js aspect too.

Judge Score: 7.00 - Change Recommended

Q33B (Gradiant & Deamerai)

- Offset's fine.

41.068 - Feels like something can be done to reduce the lef hand bias, but I'm not sure.
47.193 - Missing 16th?
49.631 - [14]?
1:24.881 - If you're focusing on the 12th jumpjacks, this 8th doesn't seem to be necessary.
1:28.506 - Could be a jump, using the off-192nd one.
1:58.131 - aw, you could've upped the ante by making these jumps every 8th, it's still pretty prevalent in the percussion thing.

Some of the jumpstreams in the last 20% of the song feels reminiscent to your WWTR chart, so that's nice.

While I think the chart itself isn't particularly groundbreaking, it's still a very solid file. Don't have much to complain about, and errors are mostly minor. Nicely done.

Judge Score: 8.00 - Accepted

OP:
-1:18.506: Agreed with the awkwardness on left hand here and suggested patterning looks fine here
-1:23.631: Not really hearing a distinct sound for this snap here among current layering and the left out vocal glitches outside of this point

Mipha:
-49.631: Agreed
-1:24.881: Was missing a few fainter sounds where 8ths could also be so I'm fine with this one being removed for consistency
-1:28.506: Added
-1:58.131: Felt with the overall density in the JS part and thinking of difficulty consistency when combined with first half that the 8th jumps were okay to leave out in this little section

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+++Deamerai's Thoughts:

OP:

-37.568 - Fixed
-38.193 & 38.256 - Sure
-41.506-51.006 - 46.006 was specifically removed to ease up on the rollwall. 47.089-49.881 is fixed.
-1:20.672 - Repatterend to approach it in a less awkward way. However it did make this section heavier on the left hand, so let me know if this is too much
-1:23.631 - There's nothing audible there

Mipha:

-47.193 - Added
-1:24.881 - There's a sound there, but it's not very audible on 1.0, so removed

Also changed 1:24.589 to make that pattern more jacky and spicy to hit

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1895 => 1897
AVG NPS changed: 15.31107 => 15.32723
Hand Bias changed: -13 => -9

I'm sorry it was marked as final but Deamerai had one last minute adjustment I didn't notice: "Adjusted 55.506-56.381 because it was too heavy on the right hand"

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Hand Bias changed: -9 => -15

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Hand Bias changed: -15 => -11

This was the absolute last edit, I'm sorry. The last minute fix Deamerai sent had two charts, so that's fixed now.