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Mipha - Termination of Desires - HOYO-MiX [7.75 / 10]
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This one I'm not too sure if it would fit into the bounty batch (it's low to mid 60s), but if it doesn't fit within the desired difficulty I wouldn't mind moving it to the regular batch. Song's a banger too.

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✔️ This chart has been marked as final and shouldn't receive any more changes.

Simfile Folder Name

Termination of Desires (Mipha)

Note Count

1033

Chart Length

2:27

Average NPS

7.1969

Estimated Difficulty

63.71

First Note

0:04

Ending Note Delay

0:04

Hand Bias

x 21

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 2 4 - 29

Jumps

x 215

Hands

x 64

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 0

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
9 - 27.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
11 - 22.00 nps 1 Second
20 - 20.00 nps 2 Seconds
33 - 16.50 nps 5 Seconds
73 - 14.60 nps 10 Seconds
139 - 13.90 nps 30 Seconds
377 - 12.57 nps 1 Minute
607 - 10.12 nps

Color Count

x 431 (41.72%)
x 339 (32.82%)
x 33 (3.19%)
x 171 (16.55%)
x 20 (1.94%)
x 6 (0.58%)
x 14 (1.36%)
x 8 (0.77%)
x 11 (1.06%)

Largest Note Gaps

3.33s3.33s1.67s1.67s1.67s1.6s1.47s1.47s
35
28
21
14
7

Approved for low 60s bounty, cleared for judging.

Termination of Desires (Mipha) [8.5/10]

- Perms, metadata, sync are good

- Difficulty of chart contains an assigned number, suggesting to remove

0:24.668 - Missing note technically
1:17.272 - Those are 48ths, not 32nds. Specifically, 48th gallop and then a 24th
1:50.536-1:50.814, 2:03.869-2:04.147 - Kinda weird what this is representing, is it the string on the right ear?
2:00.605-2:01.855 - Large anchor on column 4, suggesting to break it
2:09.772 - Why this is forming a triplet (131)? Compare with all the other sections

Good file. Nothing major to change except for very small tweaks and it's good to go.

Termination of Desires (Mipha) [7/10, CQ/FR*]

>Perms, metadata, sync good

28.314 - Should be [123], since it's a different pitch from 28.105
45.397-45.605 - Technically 32nds. Pretty sure this won't make a spike
48.001 - Ghost note. No percussion
48.105 - Technically 64ths. Understandably nerfed to 48ths
57.480 - Should be [24]. Has a different pitch from 57.689
58.704 - Sounds closer to 58.730
1:06.022 - Should be [24]. See 1:05.188
1:06.855 - Should be diff jump PR than [14]. Compare 1:06.439
1:09.355 - Should be diff jump PR than [23]. Compare 1:08.939
1:09.980 - Missing jump
1:11.855-1:12.689 - These three diff noises could use some jump variation besides [13]. The anchor is fine
1:13.105-1:13.939 - ^ but it's [14]'s here
1:15.501 - Missing note
1:15.605 - Should be diff jump PR than [12]. Compare 1:15.189
1:17.428-1:17.480 - I suggest going from 21 to 12. These two notes aren't part of the preceding trill noise
1:30.744 - Ghost note. No string
1:35.189 - Shouldn't be on [3]. Not part of the preceding drums
1:35.293 - Missing note
1:38.626/1:40.293/etc - Missing note. Recheck 1:38.522-1:48.730 for the missing 16ths
*1:50.397-1:51.439/2:03.730-2:04.772 - Offsync. It's all 16ths here
2:19.772/2:23.105 - Missing note

>>Straightforward & consistent, but very unpolished atm. See asterisk

DM confirmed the asterisk'd section wasn't offsync. Removing CQ/FR*

Deamerai:

24.668 - I guess so, but I'm not too sure about adding it since it's rather faint and would prefer not to convolute after strings of 8ths.
1:17.272 - Hmm... I'm torn on this - this was, initially 48ths in fact. But I'm hung up on whether or not 48ths would make it spikier because I have to utilize 48th minitrill and it's already a strain in itself. I suppose I'll do that, but please let me know if this is fine.
1:50.536 etc. - Yeah these are strings (or rather, continuous strings so it follows one after the other), so it does make sense to continue with the 24th swings.
2:00.605 - Moved 2 notes starting at 2:00.918 to the left. This does create a chain of 4-note long anchor on the right hand, but it is slightly better.
2:09.772 - Moved this to column 2, so 2:10.605 will be on 1.

ositz:

28.314 - I'm not really following any of the PR in this chart, it's moreso on how the sounds in itself are spread out.
45.397 - It is technically 32nds, but I'm sure it'll form a spike since it's essentially a 288bpm burst that lands on a jump. I'd rather keep it simple.
48.001 - Removed.
48.105 - Yeah I guess this can be made into 64ths, but I'd argue this is fine on 48ths given the sound itself has to be slowed down to ~50% to hear them as 4 notes, but players wouldn't notice this detail that much.
57.480 - Sure, moved.
58.704 - This was an error that got carried from the o!m chart, so good catch. Moved.
1:06.022-1:09.355 - Not really following the PR here - the focus is on the taiko triplets that got carried onward so it creates the anchors.
1:12.689 - Made this into [14].
1:15.501 - Can't hear anything here.
1:15.605 - Did something different instead.
1:17.428 - See my comment with Deamerai.
1:30.744 - There's a hearable string there, but it's competing with the taiko drum.
1:35.189 - Not following the PR but moreso the buildup towards the intensive part and it's pretty benign to me.
1:35.293 - Can't hear anything.
1:38.626 - The way the 16ths work is that in the first section is additive layering (layering the first section - 1:38.314 with clearer notes to have the 16ths, and the second section - 1:51.439 to have continuous jumpstream, since the music does tend to pick up).
1:50.397 & 2:03.730 - Talked about this in DMs, these are definitely 24ths as it's 2 strikes with the hi-hat and the taiko snares.
2:19.772 & 2:23.105 - I do hear them, but it's fainter than the other lone 4ths.

Thank you for the notes! Hopefully this stays within the low 60s range.

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:

Note to myself: I'll revert the 48th minitrills back into 32nds, they're spikier than before so had to do some compromises here.

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Note Count changed: 1031 => 1033
AVG NPS changed: 7.183 => 7.19693

Final fix - reverted the 48th minitrills into 32nds.

A new chart file was uploaded.