ricky bobby :: FFR Batch Submission
Wiosna - ricky bobby - leroy [7.25 / 10]
17th Official Tournament
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https://soundcloud.com/c0ncernn/ricky-bobby - Album (dariacore) is licensed under CC (BY-NC 3.0).
"she ricky on my bobby until I leroy" - pizza

Simfile Folder Name

ricky bobby (Wiosna)

Note Count

1459

Chart Length

2:02

Average NPS

12.1786

Estimated Difficulty

81.8

First Note

0:03

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x 1

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 29 4 - 213

Jumps

x 228

Hands

x 107

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 1

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
8 - 24.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
11 - 22.00 nps 1 Second
19 - 19.00 nps 2 Seconds
35 - 17.50 nps 5 Seconds
81 - 16.20 nps 10 Seconds
153 - 15.30 nps 30 Seconds
446 - 14.87 nps 1 Minute
849 - 14.15 nps

Color Count

x 791 (54.22%)
x 372 (25.5%)
x 20 (1.37%)
x 245 (16.79%)
x 20 (1.37%)
x 6 (0.41%)
x 1 (0.07%)
x 4 (0.27%)
x 0 (0%)

Largest Note Gaps

1.07s1.07s0.63s0.63s0.5s0.5s0.5s0.43s
35
28
21
14
7

ricky bobby (Wiosna)

- Offset's good.

1.467 - Seems to be conspicuously missing an 8th. If it's just the intro then I suppose it's alright, but it's still quite audible.
26.029 - Coloring this section as 16th is quite odd from a player's perspective - I can tell this goes to something but it's unlike anything out of every audible instrument or sounds here. You could just turn these to 192nds since it's kind of a static noise from there, but up to you.
1:28.092 - Could move these to 321 instead of 432.

Not much else to be pointed out here, though I have couple quips on how 56.842 is handled - often times I have to guesswork your jump usage as it's not super clear as to why 1:01.092 doesn't get a jump and 59.467 does get one for example. Not a dealbreaker, but can throw you off a little bit.

Despite this being freeform as a chart, this is fun as hell lmao - decent song choice to go along with it and I can tell this would be a popular release. Nicely done. [8/10]

Judge Score: 8.00 - Accepted

- 0.342: Jump, see 4.342.
- 13.592, 13.842, 15.092, 15.342: Why are these jumps?
- 17.842(and other snare hits): How come this is a jump, but hard 808 bass hits like 17.467 and 17.592 aren't, I understand you're stepping the snare as jumps, but I can barely hear the snare.
- 18.108 (etc.): What's with the 64ths?
- 19.467: So why is this a jump? No snare.
- 19.904: Same here, this 16th doesn't sound any different to me than the other 16ths surrounding it.
- 21.279: Ghost note.
- 24.717: Why is this a jump as opposed to the 4th before it, the 808 bass-y sound isn't happening on the 8th.
*** 25.779 - 31.592: Sync here seems off, are you stepping the noise? If so, you're missing a bunch of notes. 26.092/26.342/26.592/26.842/27.092/27.342 to name a few, there are more, and most of the 16th notes seem mistimed or at least inaudible.
- 31.967, 71.967: This should be part of the anchor, so 4 notes with the 16th being on another column to avoid the minijack.
- 32.467: Arguably a missing note.
- 39.342: Can barely hear this note, makes no sense as a jump imo, if it's because of the vocal then 38.842 should be a jump as well.
- 43.967: This feels too prominent to omit, it's kinda hard to discern what the 16th is going to as well, especially on 1.0x
- 47.092: Hand seems excessive for this sound.
- 47.404: Should be a 64th at 47.389.
- 55.467: This jump is significantly less prominent than 55.217, could make it a single.
- 58.134: Why is this a single when 57.009 is a jump? They're too close together to say that it's based on context.
- 60.175, 68.154: Missing note to melody/metallic sound.
- 62.842: Why jump? No snare.
- 63.342: These notes aren't spaced evenly, after syncing the 4ths the 4 notes should be ~63.350, 63.395, 63.475, 63.544, not 16ths.
- 72.967: Missing note.
- 75.842: Surprised you stepped this as 16ths as opposed to 24ths.
- 95.154: This should be a 24th at 95.134.
- 98.592: Should be a 4-note anchor as opposed to two separate 2-note anchors.
- 104.029: Missing note.
- 110.342: Arguably a missing note.
- 111.154: Should be 24th.
- 111.436, 111.748, 111.858: Missing notes to the whoosh-y voice.
- 111.592, 111.842: These 4ths are either mistimed or I'm not sure what you're stepping with these.
- 112.154, 112.217, 112.467(etc.): With how repetitive this song is I think stepping these extra notes to the melody could spice up the chart a little.

Found the chart pretty fun to play, good stamina challenge, but I noticed quite a few things that felt off, even while playing it. After taking a closer look in DDreamstudio I found the chart a bit odd in terms of structure, prominent sounds were stepped as singles while less noticeable sounds were stepped as jumps or hands. I think this file needs a second look and quite a bit of polishing. The yellow note section at 25.779 felt really off to me like you were either missing a bunch of notes or you mistimed the rhythm you were trying to highlight, FR for that.

Judge Score: 6.50 - Fixes Required

Rejected as per charter's request.