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Someone :: FFR Batch Submission
rushyrulz -
Someone -
The Flashbulb [5 / 10]
Round-Table Special Batch
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Rejected
The Flashbulb - Blanket Permission
Simfile Folder Name
Someone (rushyrulz)Note Count
729Chart Length
2:31Average NPS
4.9716Estimated Difficulty
53.61
First Note
0:05Ending Note Delay
0:02Hand Bias
x 39
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 0 4 - 13Jumps
x 168
Hands
x 15
Quads
x 0
Color Jumps
x 31
Color Hands
x 0
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second8 - 24.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
10 - 20.00 nps 1 Second
17 - 17.00 nps 2 Seconds
27 - 13.50 nps 5 Seconds
50 - 10.00 nps 10 Seconds
87 - 8.70 nps 30 Seconds
247 - 8.23 nps 1 Minute
458 - 7.63 nps
Color Count
x 475 (65.16%)
x 105 (14.4%)
x 6 (0.82%)
x 49 (6.72%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 64 (8.78%)
x 30 (4.12%)
Posted at 3:06pm on September 20th, 2023
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 716 => 729
AVG NPS changed: 4.88293 => 4.97158
Hand Bias changed: 42 => 39
Posted at 8:02pm on November 13th, 2023
Fixes Required
*Lots are going to point out the immediate missing 4th at 00:20.686.
I have absolutely no clue what the 64ths starting at 00:28.786 are going to. Assuming some level of dump.
Missing 8th at 01:11.243? 01:11.843? 01:16.043 Guitar licking is woefully not present.
*01:51.896 missing 4th, same with 02:01.496, and 02:02.996.
Finally somewhat understanding what the 64ths are going to by 02:04.946 but man they are quiet as hell and slowly integrate into a different instrument that is not present in the 1st half of them.
*02:07.200 -> 02:07.650 stuff missing here.
I don't necessarily find the 64ths a good fit in the intro of the file. Everything past 00:49.493 in-terms of 64ths plays fine. Before that, not so much. You're also missing quite a few 4ths in easy sections which are very noticeable for the difficulty. Fix those 2 problems (asterisk'd & 64ths), and it could go in.
Posted at 3:41pm on November 14th, 2023
Reject
- 20.686: Missing note.
- 20.911: Feels like a ghost note.
*** 28.940: These green notes are way over the top for the sound, it's especially hard to hear because after the first 3 notes it's pretty much only the delay slowly fading out. I would just remove these green notes tbh.
** 30.891: File is getting slightly out of sync from here.
- 41.691: Why is this only a single? See 44.091, 46.491.
- 48.144: I can't actually hear a majority of these green notes, I only hear 48.295 and 48.445 and then it just echoes and fades out.
- 52.999: Missing note to melody.
- 61.493: Why does this suddenly jack?
- 66.893: I think you could make a very strong argument for this being a hand.
- 68.318: This doesn't sound like a 4-note anchor. All these 16th notes have a different sound to them. I think 68.543 could be a minijack, but that might be slightly out of place for the difficulty of the file.
- 74.993: Jump?
- 77.243: Missing note.
- 79.643, 82.043: Same as 77.243, maybe you omitted these on purpose, but I'm not sure why. You do include the ones at 77.543 and 79.943 etc.
- 87.594: I would make this and 87.744 the same jump.
- 107.171: Again, don't feel this 4-note anchor feels super accurate to the music.
- 111.296: Should be an 8th at 111.446.
- 121.721: Same as 20.911.
- 127.350: Missing note.
I don't think the green notes feel very accurate, the music goes out of sync after 30.891 and the patterns of alot of the drums seem kinda random. If not for the green notes and the sync issues I would probably give this a light accept because I do think it's enjoyable as a low VC kind of file, but I feel there are too many technical errors on top of the two major ones I listed as ***.
Posted at 12:30pm on November 25th, 2023
27.586/29.988/45.440/47.840/1:06.593/1:16.643 - Missing note
30.030/30.443 - Ghost note? Can't hear the low pitch noise even when slowed down
43.378 - Sounds closer to 43.378
43.990 - Sounds closer to 43.978
*49.493 - Slightly harder here b/c of the extra jack on [1]. Move the jump to [23]
*1:01.493 - Move the jump to [14] to avoid the extra [3] jack
1:02.593 - Sounds closer to 1:02.581
1:03.193 - Sounds closer to 1:03.181
1:09.293 - Should be hand. CymbalCrash
1:15.293 - Should be on [3] to maintain that theme of the clacking noise
1:18.593 - Why jump?
*1:27.745-1:28.195 - Try to avoid the [3] anchor on your jumpglut
*1:37.495 - Move the hand to [124] to avoid the extra [3] jack
*1:46.496-1:47.096 - Add the rest of the 16th drum roll
2:26.902 - Bell noise actually starts on 2:26.820
Avoid the unnecessary jacks. Finish the drumroll ending
FIXES REQUIRED
Posted at 8:32pm on December 4th, 2023
REJECTED
But, this file is legitimately pretty charming and I strongly encourage you to fix this up and resubmit this. There are a bit too many things I feel *need* to be changed for me to feel comfy giving this an FR, though, so I'll go through my biggest issues with the chart:
- As a general note, the 3/16th jack motif throughout the chart in places like 27.286 is quite nice, but it's broken or changed sometimes and it's not totally clear why, e.g.:
--> 49.493 / 61.493 / etc: This does not usually form an 8th jack collision with the 3/16th jack.
--> The jack is not followed at all at 65.693.
--> The jack is broken at e.g. 75.293.
- 20.686 is clearly missing, and could even replace the 16th at 20.911 because I find that pretty hard to pick out.
* Do the last three colour-theory green notes in the run at 28.936 actually exist? I can't hear anything there. I'm not super keen on these green notes in general (for the same reasons as M0nkeyz, really), but at the least the final three should be removed.
- 43.391 & other 12th swing: 12ths are about 20ms off from the actual rhythm. They seem to be some awful 192nd quantization, but if you'd prefer not to do that for any reason, approximating it with the 32nd immediately beforehand would already be much closer (only about 6ms off).
- 52.493: No 12ths here, just 8ths.
- 106.496: Why is so much of the drum roll missing?
As ositz mentions (and I touch on with the 49.493/etc. note), there are also a fair few unnecessary jack transitions throughout that don't go to any repeated sound in the song. But again, please fix this up and resubmit--the foundation of the chart is very cool!
Posted at 11:00am on January 1st, 2024
2 FR / 2 Reject
Looking at the notes, there appears to be more to address than an FR status could justify.
Moved to reject status.
Thanks for your submission!~