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The Pizza Story [Warning - Explicit Language] :: FFR Batch Submission
MarioNintendo -
The Pizza Story [Warning - Explicit Language] -
MarioNintendo [8 / 10]
Round-Table Special Batch
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This song was created in 2012 as part of [midnghtraver](https://www.flashflashrevolution.com/profile/midnghtraver/)'s thread [Lets make a rap song about pizza](https://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showthread.php?t=125238). I claim ownership of the song, though I wouldn't be against marking this as a collab with midnghtraver.
humor file from 2012, i think it's ready for primetime.
- The sim folder name isn't as expected: "The Pizza Story (MarioNintendo)" vs "The Pizza Story [Warning - Explicit Language] (MarioNintendo)"
- The sim folder contains additional files that can be removed. [ .txt, .png ]
✔️ This chart has been marked as final and shouldn't receive any more changes.
Simfile Folder Name
The Pizza Story (MarioNintendo)Note Count
485Chart Length
1:43Average NPS
4.8826Estimated Difficulty
35.09
First Note
0:03Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x 1
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 0 4 - 1Jumps
x 25
Hands
x 0
Quads
x 0
Color Jumps
x 1
Color Hands
x 0
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second6 - 18.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
8 - 16.00 nps 1 Second
14 - 14.00 nps 2 Seconds
22 - 11.00 nps 5 Seconds
49 - 9.80 nps 10 Seconds
66 - 6.60 nps 30 Seconds
172 - 5.73 nps 1 Minute
319 - 5.32 nps
Color Count
x 116 (23.92%)
x 112 (23.09%)
x 5 (1.03%)
x 171 (35.26%)
x 13 (2.68%)
x 12 (2.47%)
x 13 (2.68%)
x 16 (3.3%)
x 27 (5.57%)
Posted at 4:28pm on November 16th, 2023
Accept
>Folder contents / metadata: Remove graphics and subtitle
6.732, .998 - Recolorize to white. You know you want to.
1:34.503 - I think you can still get the desired effect of this ending by making this some form of roll instead of a trill. It's just too fast for this overall difficulty level to be reasonable as a trill.
The story was absolutely riveting from beginning to end. I shed a tear.
Posted at 8:18pm on November 17th, 2023
Yeah I can do those edits. I have saved them locally, just waiting for the right time to upload the fix (doesn't seem to allow me right now)!
Posted at 8:23pm on November 17th, 2023
I guess I should also update the song credits: the background beat is from midnghtraver (https://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showthread.php?t=125238)
Posted at 8:52pm on November 17th, 2023
This batch is still in active judgement. You will get more reviews up until the judgement deadline at the end of the year.
https://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showpost.php?p=4792758&postcount=9
Posted at 7:11pm on November 26th, 2023
5.349 - Sounds closer to 5.376
5.562 - Sounds closer to 5.615
5.775 - Sounds closer to 5.854
14.711 - Maybe do a jump to emphasize the poverty in "poor"
24.126/1:19.578/1:30.509 - Ghost note? What word are you saying here?
24.445 - Missing note. "-le" in the word "Smile"
41.413 - Sounds closer to 41.439
47.743 - Maybe do a jump to emphasize the anger in "cock"
48.541 - Maybe do a jump to emphasize your vocal spitting in "pizza"
49.498/50.296 - Maybe do a jump to emphasize your vigor in "dick & rock"
56.200/56.360 - Maybe do a jump to emphasize your acceptance in "fuck it"
57.955 - Sounds closer to 57.995
1:00.110-1:00.535 - Maybe do a jump to emphasize your confidence in "guarantee"
1:05.136-1:05.775 - Since you're shouting, all these words should be jumps
1:15.828 - Sounds closer to 1:15.775
1:18.381 - Sounds closer to 18.461
1:20.455-1:20.934 - Since your mom is shouting, all these words should be jumps
1:26.200 - Should be jump. Mom is a witch here
1:35.493 - Move this to [1]. Minijack noise for the bowl-tapping noise
Vocal sync is fine. Just need to find more meaningful places to put jumps in. Also, it would be helpful for judging purposes if you have the lyrics for this song. I couldn't find the lyrics in the mentioned Pizza Rap thread
ACCEPTED
Posted at 8:48am on December 3rd, 2023
Yay! Alright
Posted at 2:20pm on December 11th, 2023
Accept
- 3.754: Higher pitch than the previous note.
- 11.839: English isn't my native language, but doesn't grocery have 3 syllables? I feel like I'm missing a note here somewhere.
- 42.637: This note is too late ~42.584.
Aside from it being a joke file, this is actually well made all things considered. Ending is a bit mean.
Posted at 11:10am on January 1st, 2024
3 Accept
Moved to accept
Thanks for your submission!~
Posted at 8:25pm on January 1st, 2024
Great!! I'll look into sending fixes.
Posted at 11:15am on January 13th, 2024
Updated with notes from judges. Added lyrics in "aboutThisFile.txt"
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 484 => 485
AVG NPS changed: 4.87248 => 4.88255
Hand Bias changed: -2 => 1
Posted at 9:33am on March 8th, 2024
I don't know if it's me, but the volume seems a little low on this submission. Let me know if this is something you'd need me to fix.
Posted at 11:14am on March 8th, 2024
It is a bit quiet, but I don't think you need to fix it.