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The Dynamics of an Asteroid :: FFR Batch Submission
WirryWoo -
The Dynamics of an Asteroid -
xi [8 / 10]
Round-Table Special Batch
PublicEvents
Released
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1goVL1D37TyZKlYBfER-ZIZlssHdWdq9-gLSdX6A2sII/edit#gid=0&range=A1573
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Simfile Folder Name
The Dynamics of an Asteroid (WirryWoo)Note Count
1586Chart Length
2:10Average NPS
12.6375Estimated Difficulty
84.46
First Note
0:04Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x 2
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 86 4 - 50Jumps
x 281
Hands
x 104
Quads
x 0
Color Jumps
x 0
Color Hands
x 0
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second9 - 27.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
12 - 24.00 nps 1 Second
21 - 21.00 nps 2 Seconds
38 - 19.00 nps 5 Seconds
82 - 16.40 nps 10 Seconds
152 - 15.20 nps 30 Seconds
394 - 13.13 nps 1 Minute
778 - 12.97 nps
Color Count
x 446 (28.12%)
x 365 (23.01%)
x 89 (5.61%)
x 588 (37.07%)
x 79 (4.98%)
x 13 (0.82%)
x 6 (0.38%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
Posted at 12:16am on November 23rd, 2023
ACCEPT
13.403: This poly makes sense, but feels a bit much for the sound. I'd suggest focusing on only one layer here.
30.787: Different pitch, suggest column 2 to separate from the jack.
31.284-31.681: Technically these are 24ths.
39:430: Conversely, no 24ths here, just 16ths.
47.708: Missing note.
50.191: Should be a 32nd as at 56.549.
58.205: Missing piano note.
75.688: Missing note.
87.211: Technically this is on the 12th.
104.397-104.794: Should be 24ths.
Good file, some tricky patterns but lots of fun. There are a few misrhythms (listed above) which I felt were decently noticeable at full rate, so I'd like to see a bit of polishing, but this is good with me.
Posted at 11:17pm on November 25th, 2023
15.191/15.588 - Should be single. Not piano
15.290/15.489/15.688 - Should be jump. Piano
16.383-16.780 - PR could be better. At the moment, the 24ths look like it's expressing a nonexistent ascending noise
17.575-17.972/etc - Do you have a reason for having some jumps be minijack-y ([24][14]) and some jumps that aren't minijack-y ([12][34])?
20.952-21.250 - Could be mini-jumpjacks
29.197/29.396 - Maybe jump?
33.635-33.767 - Maybe change to 322 to express the piano noise of [2]
36.846/37.144/40.522 - Missing jump
39.495-39.562 - Not really two notes, but one note on 39.529
45.191-45.290 - Jump PR should be [24][24]
1:01.780 - Not really one note, but two notes on 1:01.747/1:01.813
1:10.423/1:10.621 - Should be [12][12] for better PR
1:13.899 - Should be [12] for better PR
1:15.390 - Should be on [4] to go along with the jack noise
1:25.522-1:25.820 - Fix PR
1:27.211-1:27.310 - Not really two notes, but one note on 1:27.244
1:31.582-1:32.277 - Technically 48ths, but intentionally nerfed to 32nds, right?
1:42.211 - Shouldn't this be the single, and the jump be on 1:42.310? Compare 1:38.933-1:39.429
1:43.403/1:43.800/1:49.562/1:49.959/1:56.217 - Missing note
2:03.568-2:03.668 - Technically 48ths
ACCEPTED
Posted at 4:46am on December 24th, 2023
Accept
- 2.575: This sounds more like an ABAB pattern to me rather than jacks.
- 9.297: I'm not hearing all these 24ths, just hearing 9.297 and 9.496.
- 15.291: I think because you're following the piano with jumps you could highlight the syncopated 16th rhythm with jumps as well instead of the drums.
- 21.450: Missing note.
- 39.496: Not hearing these 24ths.
- 72.509, 73.304, : Why jump?
- 98.635: Jump is fine here, but I think having a little 48th burst would be more satisfying.
- 111.350: Jump?
- 112.145/112.443: Hands?
This is amazing, alot of fun to play and all of your layering choices were quite easy to follow. Superb.
Posted at 11:26am on January 1st, 2024
3 Accept
Moved to accept.
Thanks for your submission!~
Posted at 12:14pm on February 16th, 2024
Moving this forward to DC Engine as it's past the 1 month probationary period. If you've got fixes to submit, DM them to me so I can retroactively apply them for the Difficulty Consultants.