LOSE IT ALL :: FFR Batch Submission
Gradiant - LOSE IT ALL - 98shiki SenkaiKikanJu [7.75 / 10]
16th Official Tournament (see thread)
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Artist name doesn't look right I know, but that's the transliteration they had for '九八式旋回機関銃' on their Soundcloud

✔️ This chart has been marked as final and shouldn't receive any more changes.

Simfile Folder Name

LOSE IT ALL (Gradiant)

Note Count

1058

Chart Length

1:55

Average NPS

9.5287

Estimated Difficulty

67.97

First Note

0:04

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -2

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 2 4 - 41

Jumps

x 245

Hands

x 41

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 0

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
10 - 30.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
14 - 28.00 nps 1 Second
26 - 26.00 nps 2 Seconds
40 - 20.00 nps 5 Seconds
82 - 16.40 nps 10 Seconds
154 - 15.40 nps 30 Seconds
390 - 13.00 nps 1 Minute
669 - 11.15 nps

Color Count

x 593 (56.05%)
x 330 (31.19%)
x 4 (0.38%)
x 113 (10.68%)
x 2 (0.19%)
x 12 (1.13%)
x 1 (0.09%)
x 1 (0.09%)
x 2 (0.19%)

Largest Note Gaps

0.7s0.53s0.5s0.5s0.47s0.47s0.47s0.47s
35
28
21
14
7

LOSE IT ALL (Gradiant) [8/10]
>Perms, metadata, sync good

31.631-39.052 - Could apply the 8th minijacks here (see 21.526-29.263) to spice up this section
43.789-59.105 - What noise are the 8th jumps going to? If it’s snares, then you missed 43.789/44.737/46.000
54.131 - Missing note
56.105-56.263 - This roll sounds ascending
1:15.743 - Sounds closer to 1:15.710
1:19.947 - Ghost note. Not vocal
1:26.105 - Shouldn’t be minijack. No minijack noise like 1:22.315/1:24.842
1:31.947 - Maybe give this jump a pattern that isn’t [34]. Compare 1:31.473

>>Straightforward & consistent

LOSE IT ALL
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- Permission, sync, metadata good.

- 16.474-20.263: This whole jump sequence is notably heavier on the right hand than the left. I don't mind a bit of hand bias here and there, but particularly in the section leading up to the jumptrill (i.e. 18.053-19.000) I'd suggest a bit of smoothing.
- 50.816: Split jumptrill overemphasizes the sound a bit imo.
- 56.105: This sound is pretty dynamic, a straight 24th roll feels reductive to me.
- 57.526: Starting a roll with an outward motion is a bit awkward. Any way you can rearrange this?
- 77.263: This is a 24th early, actually on the 12th at 77.316. (77.579 is arguably a 48th early, as well. Your call if that matters to you.)
- 79.474: Remove this or add note at 74.421.
- 85.947: Why minijack?
- 86.895: Suggest moving minijack for kick to right hand to distinguish it from the melody minijack right after. Something like [23][34][12]1.
** 101.105-102.368: The song has just dropped down significantly in intensity, but the chart does very little to acknowledge this--the only difference from before is that 101.105 and 101.737 aren't jumps (because there are no kicks), but the patterning is just as difficult, and the right-handed bit at 101.895 is harder than anything in the previous section. Please make this part actually feel calmer than the previous section--repatterning to remove the minijacks, relayering the hands here to jumps, whichever.

- Overall the chart is well executed, though I'd still like to see a bit of polish. Please handle the 101.105 note in particular--when playing the file, I found myself very confused why the patterning got *harder* when the kicks and heavy synth dropped out. [7.5/10 FR]

31: Felt like keeping the minijacks while adding in 16th hi-hat would be too anchor-y
43: Isolated snares. Left out jumps in spots you mentioned due to the surrounding 16ths
54: Added and adjusted previous patterning
56: Only at the very start and then the whir sound is immediately falling pitch, keeping as right to left for simplicity's sake
1:15: Fixed
1:19: Extra percussion starts here, listen to 1:19.947 and 1:20.263
1:26: Fixed
1:31: Adjusted with few surrounding notes too

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16: Adjusted a couple jumps
50: Replaced 16th jump with a single
56: Purposefully reductive
57: I'd like to keep this as is. I don't feel like it plays any different from any of the other rolls in that it's still one direction rather than a split roll like 12431243
77: Fixed, think new spot is closer to where ositz mentioned (1:15.70) so it's there now
79: This note is for second syllable of 'say-ing'
85: Fixed
86: Fixed
**101: Feels kinda arguable that these two notes are the big problem for the FR status when they're the same intensity as previous hands, especially when ositz had no issue with them. Reducing these for background intensity now makes there be a difference between all the other claps of the same intensity so either way people might find it weird to them but sure I'll change them if that's what's keeping it from getting through. 1:41.421 and 1:42.052 are now jumps instead of hands, 1:42.368 is now a hand instead of a quad (keeping another arrow added here compared to last two points because of the crash cymbal)

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Offset changed: -0.0529932 => -0.053
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Note Count changed: 1061 => 1058
AVG NPS changed: 9.55569 => 9.52867
Hand Bias changed: -3 => -2

Good to go, moved to accepted.