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Empty Shell :: FFR Batch Submission
jh05013 -
Empty Shell -
ITHAQUA [8.25 / 10]
16th Official Tournament (see thread)
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Released
https://soundcloud.com/lostfrog/ithaqua-karakara
CC BY-NC-SA 3.0
95-97 submission
I'll colorize the last 6 notes later
95-97 submission
I'll colorize the last 6 notes later
✔️ The stepauthor has acknowledged the judges notes.
Simfile Folder Name
Empty Shell (jh05013)Note Count
3341Chart Length
3:52Average NPS
14.5832Estimated Difficulty
96.65
First Note
0:03Ending Note Delay
0:02Hand Bias
x 39
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 17 3 - 17 4 - 959Jumps
x 720
Hands
x 154
Quads
x 1
Color Jumps
x 65
Color Hands
x 1
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second11 - 33.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
16 - 32.00 nps 1 Second
26 - 26.00 nps 2 Seconds
48 - 24.00 nps 5 Seconds
113 - 22.60 nps 10 Seconds
208 - 20.80 nps 30 Seconds
544 - 18.13 nps 1 Minute
996 - 16.60 nps
Color Count
x 1458 (43.64%)
x 945 (28.28%)
x 37 (1.11%)
x 706 (21.13%)
x 36 (1.08%)
x 75 (2.24%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 84 (2.51%)
Posted at 11:30am on November 3rd, 2023
Empty Shell (jh05013)
- Offset's good.
I liked the jumpstream motifs in the first minute.
1:13.005 - Could have a note to accomodate for this missing vocal.
1:29.437 - Seems missing for something of a residual percussion here.
1:58.005 - I'm guessing this is missing an 8th but given there's percussion on the next 4th, it's no big deal.
2:01.824 - Missing 8th, you do this for 45.733.
Cute ending, I guess.
Your layering is mostly sound and fair for most of the jumpstream sections and that is good given how the song doesn't lend itself very much in variety. The bursts and most of the 24th streams are also pretty fair, even though sometimes they follow to a certain theme a bit too strict than what I initially realized upon couple of playtests. Not much to argue beyond that, just a few couple of missing notes but this is already good to go. [8/10]
Posted at 11:38am on November 3rd, 2023
Empty Shell (jh05013) [8.5/10]
- Metadata, sync are good
- Permission is questionable. The whole album is BY-NC-ND 4.0 on archive.org, while the song on SoundCloud the label displays it as BY-NC-SA 3.0. On top of that, this is just a sped-up Bocchi The Rock song with amen break samples slapped into it.
0:44.778 - Misplaced jump.
2:05.778 - Feel like mirrored works better here.
2:31.892, 2:33.187 - Misplaced jump?
2:56.642-2:56.880 - This is a bit rough with the jumps included. Maybe omit those? There's no kick there.
Near the ending of the jumpstream the hand usage there starts to get a bit questionable, care to clarify what you're trying to represent there?
Overall, this is a breakcore file. Well structured and has good pattern variety with little to no qualms. I don't think there's much else to say.
Posted at 5:21pm on December 1st, 2023
Wondering what the situation is on this file, as it is closing in on the end of the 1 month period (December 3rd) to submit and receive fixes. Since this is a straight accept, the file will be accepted as-is at a period in the future after the 1 month period and then released.
Posted at 1:16am on December 2nd, 2023
Thanks for the notes.
- I already made some changes after the batch closure, so there may be changes not mentioned in either note but they should be pretty minor. The most notable one is that 1:04.414-1:21.869 got a few more 16ths. I kept going back and forth deciding whether they are worth adding in or they are too dim, but I ultimately decided to add them since plain 8ths are a bit boring.
- 2:33.187 is for the guitar. Fixed the rest of the notes.
- Most of the hands are for strong sounds, except for 46.960-53.505 which are just vocal+jump layering. Turned some of those hands to jumps where they don't sound as strong as others.
- Colored the last 6 notes. I watched the first few episodes of Bocchi the Rock, and although I haven't encountered the sample, the latter 3 is definitely Hitori (pink) and the former 3 is most likely Nijika (yellow) due to saying "Bocchi-chan" and talking about fulfilling her dream.
Posted at 1:18am on December 2nd, 2023
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 3330 => 3341
AVG NPS changed: 14.53514 => 14.58315
Hand Bias changed: 50 => 39