Chlorophyll v2 :: FFR Batch Submission
ositzxz369 - Chlorophyll v2 - Venetian Snares [7.5 / 10]
June/July 2022
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Quiet 32nds are stepped as rolls, Fade-In 32nds = rolls that can wrap around, 64ths-nerfed 32nds = triplets, clear discrete 32nds = trills, melody mixed with the 32nds = PR is based off the melody with the 32nds occupying whatever ergonomic space remains while not looking like a roll simultaneously. Let me know if there are any noises that feel like a jump/hand to you so that I'll layer it in on future edits. Venetian Snares - is in the "Permissions List and Information v8" thread.

- The sim folder name isn't as expected: "Chlorophyll (ositzxz369)" vs "Chlorophyll v2 (ositzxz369)"

✔️ The stepauthor has acknowledged the judges notes.

Simfile Folder Name

Chlorophyll (ositzxz369)

Note Count

1506

Chart Length

2:30

Average NPS

10.2379

Estimated Difficulty

88.52

First Note

0:03

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -16

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 11 3 - 40 4 - 92

Jumps

x 187

Hands

x 23

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 9

Color Hands

x 1

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
10 - 30.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
13 - 26.00 nps 1 Second
24 - 24.00 nps 2 Seconds
40 - 20.00 nps 5 Seconds
79 - 15.80 nps 10 Seconds
140 - 14.00 nps 30 Seconds
383 - 12.77 nps 1 Minute
738 - 12.30 nps

Color Count

x 469 (31.14%)
x 357 (23.71%)
x 1 (0.07%)
x 504 (33.47%)
x 1 (0.07%)
x 136 (9.03%)
x 1 (0.07%)
x 28 (1.86%)
x 9 (0.6%)

Largest Note Gaps

2.03s2.03s2s2s1.83s1.57s1.47s1.3s
35
28
21
14
7

Chlorophyll (ositzxz369) [7.5/10]

PERMS OK
SYNC OK

16.749: Bad PR with 16.200 compared to the previous iterations.

22.968: Same thing as 16.749.

1:10.529-1:11.444: This feels kinda arbitrary to play. The chart already has lots of 32nds and here the only real 32nds are 1:10.529-1:10.712. The rest could use some originality. Same applies to 2:00.285.

1:32.481: Should probably be a (14). This doesnt share the sound the two (12) 4ths have.

1:34.218: Bit harsh for the softness of the sound, considering the minijack. Same for 2:23.974.

1:39.432: A 32nds jumptrill here would be nice and add variety, it's pretty loud.

1:52.471: Missing 32nd.

2:11.535: Inconsistent with 1:34.218 and 2:23.974.

This chart is good; nothing wrong, nothing outstanding. It's a fun VS chart despite being a bit repetitive.

7.5/10

Permission: good
Metadata: good
Sync: good

- 36.414: Not sure why this is a jack.
- 38.060: Unnecessarily long anchor here [2].
- 53.335: This pattern is a bit rough, I think seperating the last two 16ths would make this overall more enjoyable.
- 70.530: I find these split trilly patterns pretty spiky when compared to the rest of the chart. I also don't think split trill patterns are necessary here to convey the sound.
- 86.810: Anchor is too long, break it up at 86.810.
- 92.847: Jump? See 92.481.
- 105.423: I find these 32nds here to be too quiet on 1.0x to be worth including.
- 146.627: Jump?

Overall this is a pretty consistent chart and it's technically sound. On a more personal level I find alot of the patterns in this pretty awkward to hit, alot of super fast (split)trills and alot of bursts into hands. It's all technically sound, but I wish the chart was friendlier in alot of areas.

xXOpkillerXx:
16.749 - If the issue is about two the diff noises going to [1], then I justify my decision by wanting to differentiate the pitch of the 3-note descending phrase (432 vs. not 432)
22.968 - Changed. Moved it to [1] for differentiation (432 vs. not 432)
1:10.529-1:11.444 - Disagree
1:32.481 - Changed. Went from [12] to [24]. I also decided to step 1:32.846 as [14] as M0nkeyz suggested
1:34.218 - Eh, it's alright
1:39.432 - Changed. Recheck 1:39.432-1:39.615
1:52.471 - There’s nothing here? Are you referring to another spot?
2:11.535 - What’s the inconsistency? There’s a noise on all three listed spots. Unless you’re talking about 2:11.596 having a 48th and 1:34.264/2:24.020 having a 32nd? In that case, it’s just the song being weird since it’s technically accurate when slowed down.

In unrelated news, please recheck 2:22.054-2:23.883 as I was trying to make a smoother transition to the final burst.

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M0nkeyz:
36.414 - Changed. Went from 211 to 132
38.060 - Changed. Recheck 37.968-38.883
53.335 - Changed. Recheck 53.334-53.609
70.530 - Not really a split trill. Anyways, I decided to start with [13] b/c I’m trying to do PR with the two ascending buzz pitches ([13] into 2, with 32nds filling the space ergonomically)
86.810 - Changed. Recheck 1:26.078-1:26.810
92.847 - Changed. It’s now a [14]
105.432 - The 32nd is for the rising laser swoosh sound, which is then followed by the hard jump noise
146:627 - You want a jumpglut? Sure, recheck here I guess. That would mean the same thing for 1:36.871-1:37.054, which should be rechecked as well

In unrelated news, please recheck 2:22.054-2:23.883 as I was trying to make a smoother transition to the final burst.

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1500 => 1506
AVG NPS changed: 10.19714 => 10.23793
Hand Bias changed: -18 => -16

Changes look good.

M0nkeyz is fine with the current version as well. Consider this finalized