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Orbital Heart :: FFR Batch Submission
M0nkeyz -
Orbital Heart -
Clonepa [7.75 / 10]
June/July 2022
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Simfile Folder Name
Orbital Heart (M0nkeyz)Note Count
1172Chart Length
2:22Average NPS
8.4175Estimated Difficulty
73.93
First Note
0:02Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x -16
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 9 3 - 20 4 - 15Jumps
x 311
Hands
x 18
Quads
x 0
Color Jumps
x 0
Color Hands
x 0
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second8 - 24.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
12 - 24.00 nps 1 Second
20 - 20.00 nps 2 Seconds
35 - 17.50 nps 5 Seconds
75 - 15.00 nps 10 Seconds
140 - 14.00 nps 30 Seconds
390 - 13.00 nps 1 Minute
642 - 10.70 nps
Color Count
x 454 (38.74%)
x 414 (35.32%)
x 23 (1.96%)
x 184 (15.7%)
x 4 (0.34%)
x 45 (3.84%)
x 5 (0.43%)
x 13 (1.11%)
x 30 (2.56%)
Posted at 8:25pm on January 26th, 2023
Orbital Heart (M0nkeyz) [8/10]
>Perms, metadata, sync good
23.490-23.666 - These six 48ths are technically four 32nds
29.490-29.666 - These five 32nds are technically four 24ths
29.490 - What determines whether you step a trill or a roll for these types of noises? Compare 27.019, and this applies to the rest of the song.
29.843 - Could step a triplet/roll on this noise
46.783 - Why no jump? Compare 34.783
47.092 - Ghost note
47.136/47.313 - Why no jump?
1:11.313-1:11.754 - These five 5/64ths are technically six 16ths
1:48.901-1:49.343 - These five 5/64ths are technically four 16ths. The vocal stutter stops at 1:49.254
1:50.136 - Maybe change to [13] since the noise is lower pitched than the nearby [14]’s
>>Straightforward and consistent
Posted at 8:33pm on January 26th, 2023
Orbital Heart
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- Permission, sync, metadata good.
- 13.079: Suggest column 3. Different note from the column 2 anchor preceding it, yes, but also decidedly different from the column 1 anchor afterwards.
- 16.256: The anchor should change here for PR reasons--it's not only the 8th notes that are different.
** 19.652: Hey. Cut that out. Nowhere else in the file does a jack like this appear. At the very least move 19.983 to the left hand, but personally I feel this is best represented by a descending minijack pattern like 44332.
* 23.490: This also sticks out compared to the rest of the file because you don't use quantizations this high elsewhere, and I don't feel it works. It's also a bit faster than the actual rhythm, if that matters--slowing it way down (literally to 0.1) I can hear only 6 notes here, not 7. 40ths may be a better choice here.
- 30.505: Feels a bit ghosty to me since this doesn't go the voiced part of the syllable, instead just the beginning of the /s/ phoneme. Particularly since the voiced part gets another note. Alternatively cut the note to the voiced part as you do at 99.659.
- 45.019: Personal preference, I'd rather this first 40th bit were only 2 notes long to highlight the song's emphasis on the second one (and the percussion there). What you have is more technically correct, but imo feels too continuous for what the song is doing.
- 46.784: Jump?
- 50.578: Previously, you've had this 16th on another column to highlight its loudness.
- 71.313: This is cool and tasteful.
- 108.901: Unlike the other jacks with odd quantizations, I am 98% sure this is just 16ths. Would use an OHT from 108.901 up until 109.254 myself, and drop 109.304.
- 124.078: Not sure what to do about it, but this part always feels obscure to me when I playtest.
- The intermixing of 12ths and 16ths is a bit confusing, but honestly that's entirely on the song and you've followed it completely properly lol. The file is generally quite nice once the breakcore begins, although a chunk of the intro feels off to me--PR problems in the initial anchors are part of it, but I mostly feel the file tries way too hard to get going once the distorted airhorn-type things come in. FR on 19.652, though I advise adjusting 23.490 as well. [7.5/10 FR]
Posted at 3:37pm on January 27th, 2023
@ositz
- 23.490: It doesn't end on a 32nd tho, it ends on a 64th~. I changed it up, but I didn't make it 32nds.
- 29.490: I don't think so.
- 29.490: It's been a while since I stepped this, but I think it has to do with the loudness.
- 29.843: It feels more singular note-y to me.
- 46.783: Fixed.
- 47.092: removed.
- 47.136: Added.
- 47.313: Added.
- 71.313: I'm following the voice with these notes, it's quite easy to hear the hi hats on the 24ths and the voice comes in slightly earlier.
- 108.901: Changed them to 16ths
- 110.136: I like that.
@pizza
- 13.079: Fixed.
- 16.256: Fixed.
**19.652: Changed.
- 30.505: Removed.
- 45.019: Changed.
- 50.578: Changed.
- 71.313: :)
- 108.901: Changed.
- 124.078: It's unusual for sure, but it's not hard to hit imo.
I also removed alot of the less important 24ths/12ths, most of them are simply not important for the rhythm and are just mostly confusing.
Thanks for notes!
Posted at 3:41pm on January 27th, 2023
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1207 => 1172
AVG NPS changed: 8.6689 => 8.41752
Hand Bias changed: -33 => -16
Posted at 2:00pm on February 20th, 2023
FR conditions met, moved to accept. Sorry for the delay!