FR/CQ
Ow, my ears. Song is outright torture. File is okay. Think it'd be improved with a few splashes of colour theory but not necessary. Add a note 1:27.165 and 1:37.382, debatably remove 1:33.541. Double check layering for every sound like 11.947 in the whole song.

Tentative yes, I think the chart is easy to follow and the layering makes sense. However, I still had a couple of issues with it:

- I found the section from 18.904 - 22.382 a bit spiky relative to the rest of the chart.
- From a pure charting perspective I found the song a bit same-y, there was no solo or switch in dynamics (aside from a small section at 84.991 - 94.266), it kinda stayed at the same energy level.

I'm still saying yes because the layering is pretty good and the chart is pretty fun to play.

Yes.

4 yes / 1 FR
More yes than no. Not divisive.
Setting this to 'Change Recommended'. Can go in as-is, but should probably get the look-over by the Stepauthor.

Changes I made for Lolipon: A) Added missing notes at 1:27.165 and 1:37.382 that Trumaestro pointed out B) At 2:09.049 changed jump to hand to match the consistent layering throughout the file I had with the noise Trumaestro pointed out at 11.947 C) Also changed all notes that went to the above sound to white for a bit of colour theory throughout the file. Thanks for your guys input ^^

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1508 => 1511
AVG NPS changed: 11.53493 => 11.55788
Hand Bias changed: -2 => -3

Added some colour theory to the split rolls in the file and changed one of the patterns so each one is different for more dynamic play. File is now final and ready for release! Again thank you guys for your input <3

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Title changed: Lolipon => Lolitonic
MP3 Length changed: 2:13 => 3:37
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Note Count changed: 1511 => 30
Chart Length changed: 2:14 => 0:09
AVG NPS changed: 11.55788 => 4.47761
Hand Bias changed: -3 => 2

Oops... Uploaded the wrong zip because it's so close in name.. This should be the right one ><

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Title changed: Lolitonic => Lolipon
MP3 Length changed: 3:37 => 2:13
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Note Count changed: 30 => 1511
Chart Length changed: 0:09 => 2:14
AVG NPS changed: 4.47761 => 11.55788
Hand Bias changed: 2 => -3

Slight nerf to pattern of the spike near the beginning to be a bit easier to hit (changed a few jumps to [12]/[34] jumps). I'm no longer going to change anything so it can go in as is with this.

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Hand Bias changed: -3 => -1