BGM "KARAKSA" TOWN (Velocity)

- Offset's good.
*- Please remove the Subtitle information from the Properties, it should be left empty.

24.172 - Should not share the same jump as 23.636, it's a different pitch. Try making it into [13] or [23].
1:16.538 - This 16th feels out of place to me, given it's less distinct than the other sounds, arguably should be removed.
1:22.565 - Should not be a jump, in fact you're missing out on the 32nd detail like 1:14.060.
1:24.975 - Should be a jump, see 1:16.404.
1:25.511 - 234 instead of 324, it's rising in pitch like the other 24ths occurred.
1:27.654 - Same with 1:22.565, although for 1:27.788, you can use a jump here since it's slightly different from previous iterations.

It's a passable file - though your structure on the back half of the chart feels a bit unpolished, even though I can see your quick turn on the approach with only focusing the melody, since your first half is a bit full-on slow jumpstream with everything layered in it. From a technical standpoint, this feels a bit sloppy and confusing, but I don't mind if this gets in, it really needs a recheck on general layering consistency to get the elements of the chart bang on. [7/10*, Fixes Required]

BGM “KARAKSA TOWN” (Velocity) [7/10, CQ/FR*]
>Perms, metadata, sync good

6.493 - This should be the jump, not 6.560.
11.181/13.725 - Should be jump. Literally visible on the first loop of this melody at the start.
15.065 - See note on 6.493.
27.520 - Missing note
35.556-35.690 - Should switch this 23 into 32 for better PR.
*36.225-52.297 - So is this intro loop supposed to be percussion-based (like earlier), or melody-based (like now)? Apply your answer to further intro loops of the file.
40.779 - See note on 6.493.
1:07.698 - Missing note
1:29.395/1:29.663/1:29.631/1:32.073/1:35.823/1:35.957/1:40.645/1:42.520 - Missing notes

>>This file doesn’t know where to walk to. See asterisk.

Doesn't seem to have any updates made for this, so I'll move it down to Rejected. (so it doesn't get stuck up on the batch system after 8ish months)

Please do resubmit this into the future batch if you've made the fixes.