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Our Final Mourning :: FFR Batch Submission
XelNya -
Our Final Mourning -
The Flashbulb [6 / 10]
15th Official Tournament (Less Than 70 Difficulty)
PublicTokenEvents
Rejected
It's the flashbulb
This is supposed to be a tech file around the guitar slides, and more plucked notes. It WILL need framer fixes to be used correctly, but D2 / D1 would probably find this file frustrating, as this isn;t isn't a skill set you'd likely see here typically. I'd like to think it's not as cheatable without just more learning to play it right based off my playing of this.
Absolutely zero anitpa requirements are allowed if made into a token post tourney. Would be neat to see a like "SDG La Tristesse Durera Toujours" sort of requirement.
Absolutely zero anitpa requirements are allowed if made into a token post tourney. Would be neat to see a like "SDG La Tristesse Durera Toujours" sort of requirement.
Simfile Folder Name
Our Final Mourning (XelNya)Note Count
545Chart Length
1:33Average NPS
6.1282Estimated Difficulty
51
First Note
0:05Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x -33
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 3 4 - 8Jumps
x 19
Hands
x 0
Quads
x 0
Color Jumps
x 15
Color Hands
x 0
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second8 - 24.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
10 - 20.00 nps 1 Second
13 - 13.00 nps 2 Seconds
21 - 10.50 nps 5 Seconds
44 - 8.80 nps 10 Seconds
83 - 8.30 nps 30 Seconds
219 - 7.30 nps 1 Minute
394 - 6.57 nps
Color Count
x 66 (12.11%)
x 66 (12.11%)
x 5 (0.92%)
x 112 (20.55%)
x 6 (1.1%)
x 16 (2.94%)
x 14 (2.57%)
x 57 (10.46%)
x 203 (37.25%)
Posted at 12:05pm on July 28th, 2022
(6/10)
Permission: good
Metadata: good
Offset: good
- 30.214: I think this is way over the top, 4 notes to a guitar squeek? Feels very dumpy. As a result of these 4 notes the PR isn't correct either.
- 31.053, 31.916 (etc.): This also happens very frequently in the chart, notes that are significantly off, it's very apparent to me that this isn't an 8th even while playing. it should be @31.018.
- 32.061: This is one of the few occasions where I think a grace is justified and it's omitted here.
- 37.421: This rollwall feels extremely out of place.
- 37.716: Ghost-y
- 41.244: Move to 41.274.
These 6 points all indicate a structural problem throughout the chart. From the beginning to the end there are occasions of missing notes, over the top bursts, questionable PR and misplaced/ghost notes. If you're serious about getting this into FFR I think you should re-evaluate this chart and ask yourself what the essential notes are to convey the emotion/feel/intensity of the song and remove all the clutter.
I recognize this is largely subjective because I do understand what you're trying to do, that's why I'm giving it a 6 so you can appeal the rating if you think I judged your file unfairly.
Posted at 3:23pm on July 28th, 2022
"If you're serious about getting this into FFR I think you should re-evaluate this chart and ask yourself what the essential notes are to convey the emotion/feel/intensity of the song and remove all the clutter."
Is a sign you've clearly missed my objective, which is likely less a structure problem, and more an execution issue. I'd ask for a rereview, but the other sections of the notes indicate to me it has some other more precise issues to address first before your subjective issues, which to be frank, I think wouldn't be productive.