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Angel's Salad :: FFR Batch Submission
jh05013 -
Angel's Salad -
katagiri [8.25 / 10]
Jan/Feb 2022
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https://manbow.nothing.sh/event/event.cgi?action=More_def&event=133&num=273
BOFXVI permission.
Probably my first time deviating from additive layering. Still unsure about jump/hand usage and found some missing notes after submitting, but the song itself is a mess and I want to stay away from it for awhile.
Probably my first time deviating from additive layering. Still unsure about jump/hand usage and found some missing notes after submitting, but the song itself is a mess and I want to stay away from it for awhile.
✔️ The stepauthor has acknowledged the judges notes.
Simfile Folder Name
Angel's Salad (jh05013)Note Count
1786Chart Length
2:17Average NPS
13.4691Estimated Difficulty
94.73
First Note
0:05Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x -14
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 52 3 - 125 4 - 80Jumps
x 443
Hands
x 72
Quads
x 0
Color Jumps
x 10
Color Hands
x 3
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second11 - 33.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
16 - 32.00 nps 1 Second
24 - 24.00 nps 2 Seconds
43 - 21.50 nps 5 Seconds
96 - 19.20 nps 10 Seconds
181 - 18.10 nps 30 Seconds
505 - 16.83 nps 1 Minute
909 - 15.15 nps
Color Count
x 492 (27.55%)
x 397 (22.23%)
x 180 (10.08%)
x 539 (30.18%)
x 58 (3.25%)
x 58 (3.25%)
x 32 (1.79%)
x 6 (0.34%)
x 24 (1.34%)
Posted at 9:41pm on October 16th, 2022
Angel’s Salad (jh05013) [9/10]
>Permission good (2020 BOF)
>Folder contents, metadata good
>Sync good
Playtest Impression, 0.8x Rate - This seems solid, super fun.
52.509 - don’t really hear anything for this
57.255 - missing
This is remarkably intricate, and executed exceptionally well. Just an overall damn solid file, well done!
Posted at 9:50pm on October 16th, 2022
Angel's Salad (jh05013) [7.5/10]
>Perms, metadata, sync good
10.899/13.865/17.679/43.102/45.729/48.018/50.475/56.831/57.255/1:05.475/1:09.543/1:09.769/1:11.153/1:13.102/1:15.193/1:18.102 - Maybe jump?
28.187 - Why hand?
29.939 - Sounds closer to 29.924.
59.374-59.501 - I suggest turning this roll from 2143 to 1234 for better PR.
1:08.780 - Could make this sound the jump instead of 1:08.865.
1:43.893/2:04.232 - Why jump?
1:58.780 - Could make this sound the jump instead of 1:58.611.
2:06.068-2:06.662 - All three jumps sound different, fix PR.
2:07.424 - Maybe hand?
2:07.848-2:08.611 - All four jumps sound different, fix PR.
2:09.119 - Add [4] for minijack?
>>Assuming that the layering used here is percussion-based like most breakcore files, this could be reasonably harder with some more jumps, especially with the minijack sounds.
Posted at 1:27am on October 30th, 2022
Thanks for the notes.
- 10.899-12.594 kicks were slightly off so fixed
- added jumps where appropriate
- 28.187, 29.924, 52.509, 57.255 fixed
- 1:08.780 fixed, 1:08.865 sounds strong enough too so both are jumps now
- 1:43.893 sounds similar to 1:43.780, and 2:04.232 similar to 2:04.345
- 1:58.780, 2:06.068-2:06.662, 2:07.424, 2:07.848-2:08.611 fixed
- 2:09.119 added but didn't sound minijacky
TODO: 1:48.321-1:48.526 and 1:53.724-1:53.950 are bad, fix them
There is another change I want to make but didn't apply yet: there is supposed to be a menacing sound in the beginning of the break point (see https://youtu.be/47ujttiHX-k?t=87 ), but it was somehow omitted in the [ANOTHER] difficulty of the BMS chart (see https://youtu.be/cLG-prkkxUs?t=82 ), from which the music file was extracted. I'm going to put it back.
Posted at 1:28am on October 30th, 2022
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1771 => 1786
AVG NPS changed: 13.35932 => 13.47247
Hand Bias changed: -19 => -18
Posted at 7:42am on November 14th, 2022
I'll get this done by this week.
Posted at 1:28am on November 20th, 2022
Replaced the audio, and nerfed some of the nasty parts. The [24] jack is still nasty but I think it fits. Will finalize soon.
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Offset changed: -0.052 => -0.753
MP3 Length changed: 2:28 => 2:27
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Chart Length changed: 2:18 => 2:17
AVG NPS changed: 13.47247 => 13.46908
First Delay changed: 0:06 => 0:05
Hand Bias changed: -18 => -14
Posted at 6:34am on November 20th, 2022
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