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- 40.259: Why is this a single and 40.915 a jump?
- 45.040: This would be so satisfying as a minijack after the syncopation. A minijack would also prevent it from forming a roll with 45.228.
- 46.540, 46.634, 46.728: Missing notes? You included 46.353.
- 55.071: Missing white note to bleep.
- 65.072: Most of these 4-note jacks are pretty spiky when compared to the rest of the file.
- 70.728: Jump?
- 94.447: See 55.071.
- 107.009: Why jack?
- 108.509: Why jack?
- 117.556: If this is a 32nd grace shouldn't sounds like 116.759 and 104.384 be graces as well?
- 175.345: This is just a tom, I feel this shouldn't be white
- 183.134: Could make this white
- 187.165: While I understand what you're doing here with these jacks, I feel this doesn't quite catch the idea of the same sound repeating 5 times. I would make this a [4][3][4][3][4] OHT instead. This will put enough stress on the player to be noticeable and acknowledges the repeating sound better without making it a super hard 5-note jack.
- 190.931: I would remove all the notes on the left side of this weird gracetrill(?), this would make it more congruent with the notes at 190.829 and alot less awkward to play. If you want to keep this a trill, I would put the left hand notes on 190.993, 191.126, 191.243, 191.353 instead. Again, I highly prefer it not being a trill, but just being an offbeat jack instead.
- 192.509: Shouldn't this be white?
- 196.447: Jump?
- 198.290, 198.572: These notes are extremely hard to hear and pretty distracting.
- 200.665: If 200.478 is a jump this should probably be a jump as well.
- 203.103: I would put this on [4] to not form an anchor with the two 16th jumps. It's a very different sound.
- 204.040: I would make this a jack as well. It's very similar in sound to 203.853.
- 215.853: This isn't really prominent enough to be a jump imo
- 216.884: Probably the hardest burst in the chart, but it makes sense with the music.
- 220.962: See 190.931.
- 225.322: Missing 8th? See 227.947.
- 228.634: This should be an 8th at 228.697 instead.
- 232.384: Should be a 32nd at 232.400 instead.
- 274.447: See 55.071.
- 281.947: ^
- 327.509: White note?
- 337.509: Should be a 32nd at 337.493 instead.
- 366.509: Could make this white.

This is a VERY enjoyable file, unlike most VS songs I actually really enjoyed listening to this as well. I feel most of the notes I gave were small tips you could apply to make the song more coherent, but other than that I feel this is ready to go into the game.

Your Face When I Finally (ositzxz369) [8.5/10]
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- 0:11.384 I think you're really over using 432 patterns here. I feels like ever single 8th burst is a 432 despite having many different sounds. You dont have to stick wiht 321 or 432 either. something like 431 or 421 will work just fine. But with how different each of these sounds, i think its best to vary the patterning up a bit.

- 0:46.352 I find it odd that you charted this note, but didn't chart any of the 16ths at 0:46.540. This is a continuous phrase to me, and although it does get quieter, the notes are still there and you can really feel it. The notes at 0:55.634 also really suggest there should be 16ths here.

- 2:58.165 every note from 2:57.134 to 2:57.977 on 1 lands on the same sound, but this final note, is the only one that doesn't get put on 1.

- 3:18.134, 3:18.415, 3:18.696 I think you should really add jumps to these notes. They are strong and powerful and the main rhythm going on here. Its quite hard to hear/feel the notes like 3:18.204 so will really add some needed punch to the notes and help "guide" the rhythm in a way.

- 3:24.790 The lack of notes here really feels out of place for one of your files. Its the kind of sound i'd expect a constant 32nd stream for but clearly thats not what we get. I have the feeling you wanted to put notes here, but just weren't sure what to put. I'm not entirely sure how to go about it myself, but i would atleast try to force some notes in there.

- 4:30.509-4:31.259 really feels like we're missing some notes here. It feels undercharted compared to what you do with the rest of the chart. Kind of like you meant to go back later and fill some notes in but just forgot or something. Feels like there should be a few 32nds in there somewhere atleast.

- 4:48.696 The lack of jump here is quite obvious and feels bad. The snare is quite loud and obvious, and the only thing really happening so its very clear to see it missing. I understand you might have concerns about difficulty with having all the jumps, but i think it would be better for the chart, even if you have to reduce it to a [14][23] trill or something so it doesn't spike in difficulty too hard. I think even removing the jumps entirely and just using minijacks for emphasis could work. Just something a bit more consistent.

- 4:54.134 The rhythm here isn't constant 16ths and its quite obvious. It feels really wrong and not something you can really fudge like faster budges. I have no idea what rhythm it actually is, but it feels somewhere between 16ths and 24ths. There are too many sounds and not enough notes. Maybe its just best to ignore the sound entirely, or you can try and accurately. Something closer the 20ths could maybe fake the rhythm enough to play better.

- 5:27.634 I think it would be better if you charted more notes for the ascending notes in the song here. I dont think 1 note really portrays it well enough. something like a 32nd burst starting from here could do a good job.

- 5:35.477 I'm not sure how well the 1[34][12][34] pattern really represents whats going on in the music. I know its a single snare but each note is distinctly different. If i were using single notes, its the kind of sound that i would pattern like 13241324. I think something like 13[12][34]13[12][34] or 14[12][34]14[12][34] could do a better job representing the sounds. It might even make the section a bit easier to play despite the now changing notes on the right hand.

This ositz file plays like an ositz file. Not much to say other than its a long one. I think i got more than my daily ammount of VS out of that file.

Sounds good! Lemme get that moved along. Nice quick fixes mate.