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Space Doggity :: FFR Batch Submission
gold stinger -
Space Doggity -
Jonathan Coulton [7.5 / 10]
July/August 2021
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Jonathan Coulton blanket permissions. https://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showpost.php?p=4273001&postcount=2
I had to dig through wayback machine for this so it technically counts as archival.
I had to dig through wayback machine for this so it technically counts as archival.
Simfile Folder Name
Space Doggity (gold stinger)Note Count
649Chart Length
3:28Average NPS
3.172Estimated Difficulty
15.02
First Note
0:03Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x 11
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 0 4 - 0Jumps
x 121
Hands
x 0
Quads
x 0
Color Jumps
x 2
Color Hands
x 0
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second4 - 12.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
5 - 10.00 nps 1 Second
7 - 7.00 nps 2 Seconds
12 - 6.00 nps 5 Seconds
27 - 5.40 nps 10 Seconds
47 - 4.70 nps 30 Seconds
127 - 4.23 nps 1 Minute
235 - 3.92 nps
Color Count
x 314 (48.38%)
x 196 (30.2%)
x 3 (0.46%)
x 112 (17.26%)
x 6 (0.92%)
x 9 (1.39%)
x 0 (0%)
x 2 (0.31%)
x 7 (1.08%)
Posted at 5:59pm on August 31st, 2021
Some minor fixes, also I cut BPM in half to colorize a bit better. There was a lot of red.
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 647 => 650
AVG NPS changed: 3.15097 => 3.16558
Hand Bias changed: 21 => 22
Posted at 3:14pm on January 9th, 2022
Space Doggity [7.5/10]
Permission = good
Metadata = good
Offset = good
Alot of these notes to the vocals are slightly off, but you do not notice it much when playing.
- 13.389: This is higher pitched than 12.532, they're both syllables of the word 'inside' but 'side' is higher pitched than 'in'.
- 27.103: Same as 13.389, this should probably be on a different column since he's saying a different word in a higher pitch.
- 47.032: Feels like a ghost note, you're not following the softer bass playing on the 16ths before and having it as a jack feels a bit jarring.
- 53.032: The second syllable of 'receiving' is higher pitched. I understand you have a lack of room to follow perfect PR, but it feels strange to have them on the same column.
- 61.603: I would put this on the same column as the snare before it, it is a repeating sound.
- 75.317: ^
- 89.032: ^
- 91.389: Jump?
- 102.317: This isn't part of the vocals, I would just remove it.
- 105.960: Shouldn't this be a jump to be congruent with 61.603 etc?
- 121.817: VERY nitpicky, but since this is a kick + guitar and 122.460 is just a kick, I would put it on a different column.
- 124.817: I would put this on [1] so you have room for PR on 125.460.
- 125.460: PR wise this should be lower than 125.889.
- 128.460: This should probably be congruent with 121.817.
- 132.532: Higher pitched than 132.317.
- 143.889: This 16th should be a 12th at 143.817.
- 149.621: It's clear on both the waveform and when you slow the song down that these notes are off, the 64th isn't a big deal, but the 32nd is noticeable even on 1.0x https://imgur.com/a/dCBFFjU
- 160.817: The pitch of the first 8th actually changes at 160.103, but you can decide whether you want to keep it on the same column. Technically the sound that the second 8th is going to has a higher pitch than the first 8th.
Next section is just a repeat so my previous notes count there too.
Pretty enjoyable file, I feel you purposefully generalised the sync so it doesn't become a colored mess, but because of that certain notes feel off. Perhaps you could fix some of it with sub-beats if you want to keep the colors you have now. Alot of my notes are a bit nitpicky, but there's not much else to judge in the chart. It's well made. It also tells a story, which to me makes it feel shorter than it actually is. I was so immersed I felt like a dog in space myself at times.
Posted at 3:28pm on January 9th, 2022
Space Doggity (gold stinger) [7.5/10]
>Perms, metadata, sync good
0.103 - Are you stepping the melody only when the vocals stop? If so, recheck 0.103-39.531. Alternatively, you could just be consistent in this section by stepping ONLY the vocals from 0.103-39.531.
4.817 - Sounds closer to 4.763
47.460/47.888 - Missing note
48.103-120.103 - See 0.103
49.817 - I see the vocals have no effect on the jump-layering. Throughout the entire song, it seems the jump consistently occurs at the hard snare hit.
63.531/66.960 - Missing single
100.388-104.460/114.103-115.603/186.103-190.174/199.817-201.317 - It’d be nice to do white notes on the background singer as a way to differentiate from the main singer.
131.674 - Jumps are now going to the echoey parts of Electric Guitar.
136.388 - Should be jump, whereas 136.603 should be single. Similar issue on 138.103/139.817.
191.245/202.388 - Should be single (not a Hard Snare Hit, not even a Cymbal Crash)
>>The stepping of the vocals and the melody transitioning between each other in the 1st half is a bit more inconsistent than the 2nd half. Some color theory differentiating between vocals and melody would’ve been nice. But still, this is a solid file for the most part.
Posted at 7:03pm on January 9th, 2022
some fixes made, thanks for notes
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 650 => 649
AVG NPS changed: 3.16558 => 3.17204
Hand Bias changed: 22 => 11