Sun Son Sunday (Orange Mix) :: FFR Batch Submission
mi40 - Sun Son Sunday (Orange Mix) - Vospi [6.25 / 10]
May/June 2021
PublicEvents
Rejected
Song Title: Sun Son Sunday (Orange Mix)
Song Author: Vospi
Step Author: mi40

Permissions: Contacted author beforehand, mp3 available on site for usage

Simfile Folder Name

Sun Son Sunday (Orange Mix) (mi40)

Note Count

2160

Chart Length

2:27

Average NPS

15.1934

Estimated Difficulty

92.94

First Note

0:05

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x 34

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 39 3 - 64 4 - 38

Jumps

x 429

Hands

x 156

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 0

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
8 - 24.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
11 - 22.00 nps 1 Second
22 - 22.00 nps 2 Seconds
43 - 21.50 nps 5 Seconds
102 - 20.40 nps 10 Seconds
201 - 20.10 nps 30 Seconds
574 - 19.13 nps 1 Minute
1009 - 16.82 nps

Color Count

x 759 (35.14%)
x 730 (33.8%)
x 0 (0%)
x 617 (28.56%)
x 0 (0%)
x 51 (2.36%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 3 (0.14%)

Largest Note Gaps

2.73s1.03s1.03s0.87s0.87s0.87s0.87s0.7s
35
28
21
14
7

perms https://i.imgur.com/Vu9X8ag.jpg

Sun Son Sunday (Orange Mix) (mi40) [5.0/10]
> Permission check good.
> Sync appears alright, it could be shifted forward a tiny bit to make the fluctuating sync work better, but it’s fine where it is atm.
> No issues found within simfile properties.
> No issues found within submission folder contents.

-[00:13.762] Considerable amount of flam opportunities in jumps such as these that are not utilized.

-First thing immediately noticeable into the file, is that the hands are making the overall density somewhat overbearing, as it’s creating a lot of one-handed trill situations.

-Probably could be tackled a lot more tastefully by toning down the difficulty/density a bit (don’t necessarily need to remove hands) and enforcing better combination of jumps to singles in-between rather than relying on strict 8ths. For example, at 01:07.934, there is triplet repetition utilization shared between [01:07.934 -> 01:08.105], and [01:08.277 -> 01:08.448]. Same with 01:09.134, etc. Otherwise, it gets stale pretty fast by around the repeat of the section at 01:16.848 with jumps/hands primarily sticking to 8ths for the rest of the song.

-Minijacks are pretty good, have no issues with them.

-I just don’t think the overhaul would be reachable under the note regarding ‘toning difficulty/density down a bit’ so I can’t recommend a CQ here. If the average score tends to light accept or hard accept, I heavily suggest having a look at reducing consistent jump/hand usage on 8ths and spice it up by emphasizing 16th jumps periodically instead.

Sun Son Sunday (Orange Mix) (mi40) [7.5/10]
>Perms, metadata, sync good (perms granted at 12/5/21 - https://i.imgur.com/Vu9X8ag.jpg)

11.962/13.334/14.705/etc - Missing note (the last bit of the repeating fading melody are at these spots)
20.877 - Should be single
20.962 - Should be hand
24.605 - Shouldn’t this 32nd be on 24.691?
27.348/30.091 - See my note on 24.605
35.662/38.405/41.148 - Not stepping these 32nds anymore?
65.920/67.291/68.662/etc - Ghost 32nds (occurs throughout the file)
76.162 - Should be single (no kick, clap, or bagpipe)
97.248 - I suggest this to be a jump.
100.934-119.362 - You unnecessarily made this similar-sounding section harder by adding more minijacks than usual. Compare this to 76.848-86.791.
142.162-142.420 - To reduce hand strain, can you change this 3322 into a 2233?

>>Straightforward JS file.