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Absolute Smakatrosmic :: FFR Batch Submission
ositzxz369 -
Absolute Smakatrosmic -
Venetian Snares [6.5 / 10]
May/June 2021
PublicPurchasedSecretEvents
Rejected
https://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showthread.php?t=140821&page=15
Venetian Snares - is in the "Permissions List and Information v8" thread.
Simfile Folder Name
Absolute Smakatrosmic (ositzxz369)Note Count
2265Chart Length
3:34Average NPS
10.716Estimated Difficulty
89.15
First Note
0:03Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x 35
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 3 3 - 23 4 - 490Jumps
x 353
Hands
x 5
Quads
x 0
Color Jumps
x 2
Color Hands
x 0
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second11 - 33.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
16 - 32.00 nps 1 Second
26 - 26.00 nps 2 Seconds
43 - 21.50 nps 5 Seconds
88 - 17.60 nps 10 Seconds
160 - 16.00 nps 30 Seconds
452 - 15.07 nps 1 Minute
842 - 14.03 nps
Color Count
x 868 (38.32%)
x 692 (30.55%)
x 2 (0.09%)
x 540 (23.84%)
x 0 (0%)
x 116 (5.12%)
x 3 (0.13%)
x 0 (0%)
x 44 (1.94%)
Posted at 6:52pm on October 22nd, 2021
Absolute Smakatrosmic
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- Permissions, sync, metadata good.
- 9.193: What makes this a jump but not 9.327?
- 13.345: This patterning is a bit homogeneous considering how much different percussion is going on here.
* 14.818: This is very spiky, no other OHT pattern in the chart comes remotely close to this. Please make this not split-handed (or reduce the speed; see general comments below).
- 27.408: Missing jump to kick (same sound as 27.274).
- 30.622: Should be part of vocal anchor.
- 37.720: What makes this a jump but not the next two notes?
- 45.220: Treatment of this anchor seems oddly incomplete--it's not clear why 45.756 is on a different column, nor why you effectively stop following it there considering it picks up again at 46.024.
- 52.854: I really don't like this burst--there's really not much setting it apart from just being another single white note, yet it gets 32nds. In fact, at 140.979 it's followed as two white notes.
- 57.475: Missing note--this may have been omitted to make room for the minijack at 57.274 (which I really like btw) but it's pretty audible and I think that it'll fit fine as long as you make the rest of the pattern ergonomic. Perhaps along these lines: https://i.imgur.com/S91bYex.png
- 84.729: This pattern feels a little underwhelming, would use a minitrill for emphasis.
- 90.756, 139.506: This is a 48th early, the swing here is pretty audible.
- 92.966, 93.234: Ghost notes.
- 93.301: Should be 24ths.
- 147.542: Works fine as an approximation, but technically these are a little faster than 16ths with 8 notes per phrase instead of 7.
- 157.385: The 't' phoneme starts here, but the 'tros-' syllable is more accurately on the 8th at 157.452.
- 182.497: The sound these 32nds go to persists for a while longer, since you don't acknowledge it any further beyond this I'd suggest just removing them.
- 194.249: Weirdly tight minijack, I don't feel this really fits the sound or the chart.
- 209.551: Missing jump: the kick from 207.676 is present here, as is a cymbal.
- The bursts feel a little generally overdone to me; in most cases the buzzes they go to are pretty soft, so I'd be in favour of dialing them back to 24ths, with a couple exceptions. This would also allow more freedom with respect to patterning. That said, your approach is valid and acceptable.
- There are a smattering of missing notes throughout the file. Here are the ones I noticed:
31.760, 37.653, 78.903, 145.466, 166.292
- While no issue really impacts playability too much (except the splitroll), there are a lot of minor issues that stack up against this file. Needs a bit of general cleanup. [6.5/10]
Posted at 7:21pm on October 22nd, 2021
Absolute Smakatrosmic [6.5/10]
Sync, permission, metadata good
-7.385: The roll actually starts at 7.318, but since you're only stepping the 32nd part of the roll 7.385 and 7.419 feel like ghost notes, especially since you're not stepping the speed up at 7.854.
-14.818: This is an extremely hard split trill, if the end result is that people are going to jumptrill it I think a 1234 or 2134 like pattern would be more appreciated.
-24.327: This stands out alot, I think emphasising this somehow would be warranted. It definitely feels a bit strange having this on the same column as the jump before it. You also have it on a different column at 26.202
-24.863: The sound here actually starts on 24.813, I think it's strange that the roll starts on 24.863, especially considering 24.595 isn't a roll.
-30.622: Why is this not part of the anchor?
-45.220: I think this is incorrect as 8th's, there's an audible swing here and it doesn't stop at 45.756.
-45.756: If this is not following the beep sounds instead of an 8th it should be on 45.700, but I understand if you want to make it a 16th at 45.689 instead.
-48.702: This is incorrect as pure 16th's
-52.318: The PR is ascending, something like 1234 would be more suitable, the current pattern suggests a descending sound.
-52.854: I would make this 4th a white note instead of a 32nd roll to be consistent with the white notes before it.
-57.475: Missing 16th, I agree it's fairly hard to hear, but it's the same sound as 57.609 which you do step.
-58.412: This shouldn't be a triplet since the PR is ascending here.
-59.015: I understand your structure of only putting jumps to the kicks, but when I hear hard cymbal hits like these I think jump usage should be somewhat congruent with the intensity of the sound. I do understand it's a conscious decision, but it's a decision I don't really agree with.
-60.488: Echo to the vocal, I think this one is loud enough to warrant a note
-93.301: The vocals here are 24ths instead of 32nds
-106.292: This note is lower in pitch than 110.042, since there's nothing going on here I feel there's room to pattern according to PR.
-106.426: This should be a BAB pattern instead of BBA
-113.926: ^
-117.542: ^
-147.542 - 148.479: These are not 16ths this is very noticeable even on 1.0
-153.836: Why is this a single 4th arrow without coloration or any emphasis at all?
-156.414: This 32nd is actually a 64th later at 156.431
-156.850: This should actually be a 64th earlier at 156.833
-156.984: This is a 48th late and should be a 12th at 156.961
-157.118: ^ 24th at 157.095
-157.229: ^ 12th at 157.229
-157.754: this 32nd should just be an 8th at 157.720
-166.292: Missing 8th
-172.720: Don't really think this warrants a hand since there are alot of cymbal crashes before it.
-179.818: I do think a hand is warranted here since the sound drags on for multiple measures
-187.318: Why is this a hand and not 195.622?
This is not a hard reject, I think there's alot of cool stuff going on here, but I also think the file suffers from repetitiveness and a lot of small errors. It's definitely playable and somewhat similar to your files already in-game, I just think it needs some polish.
Posted at 5:03pm on October 23rd, 2021
In this song's 2nd draft (which i'll resubmit on a later batch), I did both judges' suggestions except 1 from each of them; Regarding Pizza's 209.551, I didn't put a jump there b/c there was no kick (for this file, kicks = usually jumps); Regarding m0nkeyz's 187.318, 195.622 isn't a hand b/c it's not a "Hard Kick + Long Bzzz Noise"