2.031 - 2.703: Respect choice to not include the last two 12ths of the melody here since it'd introduce too much polys with the percussion as well

2.703 - 5.392: Also appreciate not stepping this stream as more accurately 32nds, but 24ths instead. Even as 24ths though it's easily hardest part of the file and tiny bit spiky considering the more 3-note staircase patterning rather than a more traditional stream. Still think it plays alright though

9.594: Try to avoid longer chains of notes like this (3) column here

11.779: Hearing this 4th here better fitting as part of a minijack with the 16th jump on 11.695, rather than a minijack with the one on 11.863, just due to this note also having that same bass kick sound as the jump just before. Not as jarring though since current patterning still feels smooth because of 11.443 also being a jump and then 2-note minijack

17.157: Similar minijack adjustment as 11.779

20.518: Wouldn't want to call this an error, but a strong suggestion to switch this hand to a (124) instead so this more distinct snare sound doesn't have same (34) usage as the bass kick jumps right before it

27.913: Similar minijack adjustment as 11.779

30.602: And same here as well

*Very solid, short and sweet. A bit aggressive with the layering maybe with more jumps/hands but it's consistent and not too much. Would just take more notice of those 4 pointed out instances regarding the minijacks like at 11.779