First file

[Darkbreezee]

y thanks a bunch halogen =)
well i cut the song about 1 minute and the offset etc. was kinda different now

anyways, i spent a lot of time in getting used to ddream ..,i looked up the BPM / Offset with DDream, its so epicly precisely , after i cuted the song my offset + bpm , in order to match all the bass notes now is :
183.602 and an offset of 0.305 ..., its all fine now xD

I will finish my file , change some steps , add some more variety and make sure all the placed arrows make a sense , so u will be able to feel what Beat / sound u are actually playing =)

I hope i will find some volunteers again if my work is finished =)
Anyways:
Thanks a bunch to all testers and reviews so far ^_^

[rushyrulz]

I'll take a look.

[Darkbreezee]

thanks rushy =)
and well i guess i improved with the steps .. tried to pay soe additional attention to the pitching stuff , but still i doubt that i got it real righty tho xD

[justin_ator]

Stepping is a process, just keep it up and eventually you'll get the file where you want it.

[Darkbreezee]

y i know .., well my file is finished now, if any1 wants to give it a last try please PM me =).
I'd be happy ^^

[MarioNintendo]

I'll re-review it

[XxMidigamixX]

I'll re-review it as well

[MarioNintendo]

My review:

HOLY JESUS. That newer version is 30 times better than your previous one, good job!!! This review is going to be much shorter, as I don't have as many things to point out. Most of the things I could talk about (difficulty, jump placement, etc...) would be pretty subjective, so I'll only go straight to the point and name the few errors left that I caught. But, before I begin, let me applaud you for that huge progress.

- Your folder for your song is still incorrectly identified. In stepmania, everything is ok (even that sexy new cdtitle shows up, wow!). You only need to replace "Dj Sharpnel (DarkBreezee)" by "The Others (DarkBreezee)" in your song folder (aka Windows)
- You said that the sync would be perfect, but the notes come up too soon this time around (aka the song's BPM isn't constant and you'll have to make small adjustments throughout the song with DDReam by tweaking the beats one by one).
- I still dislike the idea of having 34th streams at that BPM, they form a wall that is pretty much impossible to master.
- I like the progression you made through the song, notably that in the beginning you removed the jumps. This made the learning curve of your song much much better!
- Nice cut, although I don't think the place-holder note in the end was really necessary?

... overall, 4/5! 80%! GOOD JOB.

[Darkbreezee]

Here it is :

Click me !

Latest changes:

->Some BPM / Offset changes to match the sync even with x0,5 speed ( switches often between 183.61- .58)

->Decided to take out the 32th walls, due to the fact that the stream part in the middle of the song is difficult enough, want to keep this song still be AAA-able, without getting berserk because of these doom walls.
=> replaced them with 4 x 16th waves :
0004
0030
0200
1000
0004
0030
0200
1000
etc.

-> Cut the song from ~4:40 to 3:30

Again thanks to all the testers =)

[MarioNintendo]

No prob, and good luck if you ever send it in a future batch!

[Darkbreezee]

is there a section in the forum , in which batches are getting announced? ^^

[psychoangel691]

There is usually a thread made or it is put in the queue batch discussion thread. We just finished with the new artist batch so it'll probably reopen in about a month.

[Darkbreezee]

thanks for the information =)
i'll stay tuned ^^

[who_cares973]

file was ok. you rely too healy on these patterns though 12321 and 43234

[Darkbreezee]

well guys thanks a bunch for all the testing and feedback giving etc. ( special thanks to MarioNintendo who rly supported me that hard xD, guess he is the one who made me keeping on with changing / correcting and whatsoever xD)

i will keep on with simfiling, and maybe u guys will AAA one of my songs in the future =P

Thread can get closed. =)

[Darkbreezee]

Hey how , i created a new stepchart .., due to the fact that i hadnt had internet for about 2 weeks and stuff, but the tools to create sims , i decided to spend some of that time into simfile creation (again) ...

it took me about 2 days ( jesus im bad i guess) , and well im still a newbie in simfile creation , yet i'd be glad if some persons wouldbe so kind and give that file a try =)

i really really want tons of feedbacks, but please constructive criticism, that helps me to improve.

e.g.: comments like :" Bad .., lol pretty cool" , actually thats your opinion but it wont help me at all xD
if you like a part .. why?
if you think that this part was pretty shitty .. why?"

etc. guess you all got where im pointing at =)
well, please keep in mind that this is my SECOND evermade simfile, dont expect fency stops / bpm changes and whatsoever =)

have fun testing =)

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