These Dwarfs Don't Belong To Snow White

[CammyGoesRawr]

Decided to steer away from making wubs on this one. steered wayyyy awayyyyy. Have a listen, all feedback is welcome c:

https://soundcloud.com/toxictoxika/these-dwarfs-dont-belong-to

Also, when this is finished, permission is granted to use it under my band's name, An Era No More

(Update 5/19/13) Here is an updated track, had to make some major panning changes.

https://soundcloud.com/toxictoxika/these-dwarfs-dont-belong-to-snow-white

(Update 5/22/13) Finished recording!! I don't want to type out a story for this update so here it is without further adieu.

https://soundcloud.com/toxictoxika/these-dwarfs-dont-belong-to-snow-white-official

[Charu]

I can only hear the right ear? I don't know if that's just me though.

[yo man im awesome]

Sounds like it's really good, but why is it panned like 100% to the left right speaker?

EDIT: i think it'd be p. sick if you had it pan 100% to one side like this until around :28, then balance it out

[Coolboyrulez0]

yeah exactly what yo man said. the instrumentation and composition is wicked just fix the actual mix. levels are fine too, if you can fix the panning issues I can master it for you to commercial levels. (w/o clipping ofc)

yeah I'm pretty sure I'd step this once you create a stereo mixdown.

[CammyGoesRawr]

I think I know why it might be panned to the right. Fixing now, I accidentally put in a fader track to see what it does, and i never took it out, Will make an update post once its fixed.

[CammyGoesRawr]

Update post!!! Worked on the song a bit today and I can honestly say it turned out pretty well. Fixed the fader track so it's no longer panned 100% to the right.

(will update the OP with the new track)

https://soundcloud.com/toxictoxika/these-dwarfs-dont-belong-to-snow-white

[Coolboyrulez0]

hi there, i did a master (loudness, saturation, reverb etc.) since i think this track had a lot of potential.
i think it brings out the best of the track but also shows some issues like the loud drum mixing (hard to fix with just master track; would need stems)
hope you like this version -- i for one love the track and think the master benefits it.

http://www.mediafire.com/?ml5fidb4255uqp8

Feel free to use it if you like it, i dont really need credit i just do this for my enjoyment / practice!

[CammyGoesRawr]

Eric this is pretty damn good. Thanks for the feedback! Out of curiosity, do you have any versions of Pro Tools LE? If so, I can send you the folder with the project file, audio files, tracks, inserts, etc. so you can get a better master of it.

Just a suggestion :3

[Coolboyrulez0]

No, I sadly don't, but if I do have some spare time just send me the audio files (stems) themselves -- and I'll be able to restructure, mix and master the track. Glad you enjoyed it haha.

By stems I mean each individual track (guitar lead, drums, etc.) rendered as an individual .wav file.

[CammyGoesRawr]

Will do later tonight

[CammyGoesRawr]

Double-post because I finally finished recording all parts, mixing, and fading at the end. Didn't think it would end up at 8:38 but every time i listen to this, i don't get bored a single time. so i present what i'll call a rough master of this track. Next stop is to render all the individual stems and have CBR do a more professional master on this.

https://soundcloud.com/toxictoxika/these-dwarfs-dont-belong-to-snow-white-official

(updating OP as well)