10-21-2009, 12:32 PM
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What does this need?
Well, okay. I'm new here and I have quite a few songs in the works.
The main one I want advice on is first in the list, it's called "Circuit Breaker". I can't put a finger on what it needs. Anyone got any suggestions? [EDIT] oh, forgot the link. Here: http://www.myspace.com/rickylee2 |
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10-21-2009, 01:07 PM
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Re: What does this need?
That's easy, actually.
It needs a bassline, and probably some pads. And I would recommend cleaning up the low frequencies of everything else (aside from the kick) before including a bassline or it will end up as a lot of mud. 8D
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10-21-2009, 01:53 PM
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Re: What does this need?
Thanks, I'll try sticking one in and seeing how it sounds.
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10-21-2009, 08:15 PM
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Re: What does this need?
Some percussion that isn't 64th or 128th notes might be good too
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10-21-2009, 08:24 PM
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Re: What does this need?
Oh my gosh I love your music <3
I think the melody part could be a little cleaner sounding so it stands out better in some parts. Anyway, I'm not a music major or anything, but keep making your music. It's really cool and unique!! (:
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10-21-2009, 08:33 PM
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Re: What does this need?
Less snare rushes. But you're doing a good job.
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