poem :o

xferrarix · 08-15-2009, 09:54 PM

this is a ver serious thread; got bored today and wrote this. basically means to keep your mind free.

my soul, why does it feel as if its burning?
so much pain, my stomach is churning
emotions slow the mind and ease the spirit
loosing the fear of heartbreak lifts the spirit
slow the thoughts and you will forget
what it means, check it in a antionette
keep the soul free of sin
feel the pain and let it all begin
break free from those chains
and begin to see life anew

Serenthesis · 08-26-2009, 07:16 PM

As jokes are not funny when explained, poems lose their mysteriousness when explained.
You rhymed spirit with spirit!

08-15-2009, 09:54 PM	#1
xferrarix FFR Player Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Spring Hill Age: 31 Posts: 1,091	poem :o this is a ver serious thread; got bored today and wrote this. basically means to keep your mind free. my soul, why does it feel as if its burning? so much pain, my stomach is churning emotions slow the mind and ease the spirit loosing the fear of heartbreak lifts the spirit slow the thoughts and you will forget what it means, check it in a antionette keep the soul free of sin feel the pain and let it all begin break free from those chains and begin to see life anew

08-26-2009, 07:16 PM	#2
Serenthesis FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: I live where my heart is. Posts: 5	Re: poem :o As jokes are not funny when explained, poems lose their mysteriousness when explained. You rhymed spirit with spirit! __________________ What am I doing? Interceding for god.

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