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Old 12-1-2008, 11:13 PM   #1
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Post Twilight Phase

Artist: Defade
Title: Twilight Phase
Length: 4:13
Genre: Electronica, idk...

- http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7017991

I'm posting this here in the hopes that somebody else in the world will listen to my music. I'm new to this, and I can't improve if I have no idea what to improve upon.
Constructive critique is most welcome, and I thank all those who take the time to listen to it, even if you dislike it.
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Old 12-2-2008, 03:04 AM   #2
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Is this your first song?

Either way, it's not bad.
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Old 12-2-2008, 03:27 AM   #3
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I would say...

just keep making more music! ^_^
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Old 12-6-2008, 09:56 PM   #4
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Is this your first song?

Either way, it's not bad.
Thank you. I'd consider it my first song in that it's the first thing I've made that I consider at least decent enough to let others listen to it. I'm still learning a lot about mixing as you can tell, it's kind of messed up with this song.

I'm going to complete a few more songs I have as I love them and love composing, it just helps to know if anyone else actually likes them also. I guess it's like that for all musicians ^_^;
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Old 12-6-2008, 10:21 PM   #5
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This song sounds like a remix of another song, but this is 100x better. Go finish your other works in progress!
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Old 12-21-2008, 10:40 PM   #6
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New song.

Artist: Defade
Title: Forever Is Too Short (Cliché, I know)
Length: 5:50
Genre: I'd call it trance of some sort... (I have trouble classifying my own music...)

- http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7169999

I wasn't expecting it to end up so long, but it just kinda... happened.

Please bare with the sup-par mastering, I'm new to this and I'd like to think I'm improving at least. I also plan to re-master all of my music as I get more experience and better equipment.

Anyway, I appreciate any and all who take the time to listen, regardless of whether you like it or not.

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