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Old 03-10-2008, 08:10 PM   #1
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Default premature birth

yeah..im back in the forums.been a while...any way this is a poem dedicated to my baby cousin.she died a few years back during birth...so i decided to write this poem...

Premature child not ready to be born, Slowly breathing trying to grip onto life, It slipped out of her hands, taken her back to the darkness she always known, Gods angels sent her back to heaven to meet the father she never knew.

Precious jewel, a fragile life, Premature child trying to survive but she’s not strong enough, Each breath slowly ending her life.

In god's arms being cradled there, She rest in peace, Forever held dear.
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Old 03-10-2008, 08:24 PM   #2
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That's beautiful. I'm honestly speechless because of that fact. In my family we had a scare like that, my brother in fact. he was born about 3.5 weeks premi. almost died, though i was 3 years old i can still remember how scared i was for him and my mom and just everyone. everyday we went into the nicu to see how he was doing. my mom went into post pardum depression. that was a horrible sight to see at 3. but a good thing came from this, she (my mom) opened up the first centre for post pardum depression in my town.
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